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In my wallet is my busticket because I need that every day because I go to school by bus.

I take my ticket in my wallet because you can find faster when the bus came.
I drive from Gummersbach to Wipperfürth by bus which is very exhausting because it takes a very long time and I constantly change the buses.
I must be careful because I can not be lose the ticket because I must geht than a new one and that is expensive.

ein anderen TExt:
I take my money in my wallet, so I don´t lose it.
My wallet is always in my bag that is better because I don´t forget where is my money and ( die Vorteil dafür ist, dass ich mein Geld immer bei mir habe.)

wieder anderen Text:
My AOK card is always in my wallet because the card is very important for me and I don´t lose this.
The card is very important because when I was ill than can not with card to doctor.

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