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Korrektur einer Englisch-Hausaufgabe

Frage: Korrektur einer Englisch-Hausaufgabe
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Hi Kan jemand mal rüber schauen ob alles so ok ist auch Grammatik? Danke!

Aufgabe B:Imagine a lot of things went wrong on Katrin’s holiday.
Write a dialogue between Katrin and a friend/ colleagues
In which Katrin talks about the problem she had.
Write 100-120 words.

Freundin:Hello Katrin how are you? How was your holiday in France?

Katrin: Hello nice to see you.
My holiday was very nice. There were a few problems.

Freundin:Really? So tell me.

Katrin: Imagine! The first day of vacation was stressful.
I wanted to arrive at the airport on time.
But the taxi what I had ordered came 15 minutes to late.
I thought I would miss my flight to Zurich.
Luckily it wasn’t so.

Freundin:Well, you was in luck again Katrin.

Katrin: It is true. Finally I was in France.
It was really nice over there.
The people were very nice and the landscape was beautiful.
Freundin:Have you been satisfied with your hotel room?
Katrin:I wasn’t in a hotel.
I had a small room on an almond farm.
It was a catastrophe!
The bedlinen wasn’t too clean either.
And there weren’t any towels.
The room didn’t even have a shower.
The shower was in a separate room on the corridor.
So I had to wash me every time in the corridor.
That was maybe cumbersome.
Freundin:So, same like as 30 years ago right?
Katrin: Then I visited a very nice village and wanted to travel back by train.
I choosed the wrong train so that I don’t even knew where I was.
Freundin:Oh God, and what happened?
Katrin: Well, and then I contact the owner of the almond Farm.
And asked him to pick me up what he did.
Unfortunately I had to wait for 3 hours on this small station.
Freundin:But otherwise, you could enjoy your holiday right?
Katrin: All in all it was a nice holiday, and I met a lot of nice people there.
On the flight back home my luggage has been lost.
FreundinOh Katrin come on, let`s take a coffee and then we will see what to do.
Katrin: Oh, yes this is a nice idea.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 05.05.2012 - 14:19


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Antwort von FranziW | 05.05.2012 - 14:29
Hallo, ich habe dir hier ein paar kleine Fehler korrigiert :) Ich hoffe das hilft dir!

Freundin:Hello Katrin how are you? How was your holiday in France?

Katrin: Hello nice to see you.
My holiday was very nice, but there were a few problems.

Freundin:Really? So tell me.

Katrin: Imagine! The first day of vacation was stressful.
I wanted to arrive at the airport on time,
but the taxi which I had ordered arrived 15 minutes too late.
I thought I would miss my flight to Zurich.
Luckily it wasn’t so.

Freundin:Well, you were lucky again Katrin.

Katrin: It is true. Finally I was in France.
It was really nice over there.
The people were very nice and the landscape was beautiful.
Freundin:Have you been satisfied with your hotel room?
Katrin:I wasn’t in a hotel.
I had a small room on a farm.
It was a catastrophe!
The bed-linen weren`t very clean either.
And there weren’t any towels.
The room didn’t even have a shower.
The shower was in a separate room on the corridor.
So I had to wash me every time in the corridor.
That was maybe cumbersome.
Freundin:So, same like as 30 years ago right?
Katrin: Then I visited a very nice village and wanted to travel back by train.
I choosed the wrong train that I don’t even knew where I was.
Freundin:Oh God, and what happened?
Katrin: Well, and then I contact the owner of the Farm,
and asked him to pick me up, what he really did.
Unfortunately I had to wait for 3 hours at this small station.
Freundin:But otherwise, you could enjoy your holiday, right?
Katrin: All in all it was a nice holiday, and I met a lot of nice people there.
On the flight back home my luggage has been lost.
FreundinOh Katrin come on, let`s take a coffee and then we will see what to do.
Katrin: Oh, yes this is a nice idea.


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Antwort von Korni1976 | 05.05.2012 - 14:32
Supi dank dir :-) hilft auf jeden fall weiter.

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