Englisch-Facharbeit

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Ich weiß, das mein Englisch grotten schlecht ist.

The film raisin in the sun directed by kenny leon, is a drama film from 2008.
the film deals with the life of a family, called Youngers. The story is about hope and realize the dreams of the family. The story is a very emotional narration from the 1950Žs. Lena Younger is a widowed and a religious woman. She will gotten the insurance money from his dead husband. She want to use the insurance money from his husband to buy an house with a garden to achieve her dream for her family to move up in a better life and better living conditions. Walter lee younger is the son from Lena. He is the dreamer in the family. He wants to be rich and would like to open a liquor store with his friend and plans to acquire wealth with his friend and Willy harris. Walter lee is married to be Ruth younger. Ruth is a woman about thirty, but her weairness her seem older. Ruth takes care of the small apartment. She have problems in her marriage with Walter and hope to solve his problems. Benethia is the daughter from Lena and the little sister from Walter Lee. She is twenty years old and is very intelligent and educated. She want to put across his dream of being a doctor as a well educated black woman. The problems in the family began with the insurance money from 10.000 $. All the family members have other ideas to spend the money. But the majority problem was Walter lee. He want to open a liquor store with his friend and willy harris. As he have experienced that the his mother, lena has buy a house in the white quarter ,he was very dissapointed. The other promblem was the marriage, because ruth was pregnat and want abort the the baby. The reason to want abort the baby was walters muted. He was absent and depressed. But the positional have changed and ruth have different decided. The mother Lena have give the rest of the money to walter lee therewith he can achieve his dream and say that 3.000$ are for betethias study.
So have the sittuation from the family younger has improved and all the family members achieve his dreams because mama Lena want to buy his own family house ruthe too. Ruth want to have a better living conditions and walter want to open his own liquore store lastly betethia, have become a support from his mother for his dreame to being a doctor as black-woman.
Futhermore, benethia wants to be successful in her life and job but more important is that he wants to have a happy life. This imagination was destroyed, because Walter Lee and his friend Bobo were deceived from Willy Harris.( Die familie war schon in der neue wohnung „Haus“ als sie erfahren haben das das ganze geld verloren gegangen ist bzw.Walter verarscht wurde.)
The family was dissapointed because walter lee have the money from benethia spend too.
Finally the family have only the house as possession. As the enviroment have seen the family youngers as sole black-family they have send the Minister from the white -viertel to wheedle to move out for the twice as much payment. The first answer from the family youngers was against because the family was free to make decision. But walter have altered his meaning as he have experience that willy harris have stoled the money and want to sell the house for the money. He dont want to stop his dream. At the end walter have understood his mistake and have dont pride his injured.
Mother lena have says, it was the day that he grow up .

(Walter lee wollte erst das haus nicht verkaufen,weil er der meinung war das sie sich schon richtig entschieden haben und alles am gut laufen war bis er erfahren hat, dass er von seinem willy harris hintergangen wurde, wollte er das haus verkaufen um mit dem geld seinen traum weiterhin zu verwirklichen. Am Ende hat er es aber begriffen und wollte das haus nicht verkaufen als der mann gekommen ist um den vertrag zu unterschreiben.somit hat er seinen traum nicht verwirklichen können aber seinen stolz immernoch behalten in dem er sich dagegen entschieden hat).