Menu schließen

English Summary - Korrekturlesen

Frage: English Summary - Korrekturlesen
(6 Antworten)


Autor
Beiträge 0
7
Hallo,

ich habe ein summary über einen Artikel geschrieben und bitte euch diesen zu überfliegen und ggf.
zu korrigieren.

Danke im Voraus


----------


Nicolas Corr, the author of the book "the shallows" has been studying some different scientific researches about the impact of the World Wide Web on our mind for the past three years. The result of his study is his book and the article "How the Internet is making us stupid", by Word and Press in Feb 2011.

He presents arguments of using the internet as a very quick possibility of acess to information and a tool of communication. However he mainly thinks that it has a bad influence on our life. It has been changing becomming scattered, superficial and distracted. The reason for it is that we aren`t able to master/juggle a vast a mounts of information on the internet at the same time.Also, we are less concentrated, reative and productive than people who do one thing at a time.

All in all he is sure that a constant using of this medium makes us addictive to it and that it damages our intelletual lifes, our minds and our cultures.
Frage von LuluCoyle (ehem. Mitglied) | am 02.03.2011 - 13:34


Autor
Beiträge 0
7
Antwort von LuluCoyle (ehem. Mitglied) | 02.03.2011 - 14:05
bitte um hilfe :)


danke im voraus :))))))))))))))))))))


Autor
Beiträge 0
7
Antwort von LuluCoyle (ehem. Mitglied) | 02.03.2011 - 14:51
keiner da der helfen kann? :)


Autor
Beiträge 653
3
Antwort von Geissbock | 02.03.2011 - 14:58
Nicolas Corr, the author of the book "the shallows" has been studying many different scientific researches about the impact of the World Wide Web on our mind for the past three years. The results of his study are published in his book and the article "How the Internet is making us stupid", by Word and Press in Feb 2011.

He gives arguments of using the internet as a very quick possibility of access to information and as a tool of communication. However, he mainly thinks that it has a bad influence on our life. It has become scattered, superficial and distracting. The reason for that is we aren`t able to manage all these vast amounts of information on the internet at the same time. Also, we are less concentrated, creative and productive than people who do only one thing at a time.

All in all he is sure that a constant use of this medium makes us addictive to it and that it damages our intelletual lifes, our minds and our cultures.


Autor
Beiträge 0
7
Antwort von LuluCoyle (ehem. Mitglied) | 02.03.2011 - 16:56
hatte dann ja doch nur wenige fehler, danke dir :)


Autor
Beiträge 176
7
Antwort von Timea | 02.03.2011 - 18:06
...intellectual lives, our minds and our cultures...


Autor
Beiträge 0
7
Antwort von Rubi-Bubi-Man (ehem. Mitglied) | 02.03.2011 - 18:58
Nicolas Corr, the author of the book "the shallows", has been studying some different scientific researches about the impact of the World Wide Web on our mind, for the past three years. The result of his study is his book and the article "How the Internet is making us stupid", by Word and Press in Feb 2011.

He presents arguments of using the internet as a very quick possibility of acess to information and a tool of communication. However, he mainly thinks that it has a bad influence on our life. It has been changing becoming scattered, superficial and distracted. The reason for it is that we aren`t able to master/juggle vast amounts of information on the internet at the same time. Further (würd ich statt "Also" benutzen"), we are less concentrated, reative (kenn` dieses Wort nicht, wahrscheinlich falsch geschrieben?) and productive than people who do one thing at a time.

All in all, he is sure that a constant useof this medium makes us addictive to it and damages our intellectual lives, our minds and our cultures.

Habs ganz schnell auf grobe Fehler überflogen.. Schaus mir nachher vllt. nochmal an..

Verstoß melden
Hast Du eine eigene Frage an unsere Englisch-Experten?

> Du befindest dich hier: Support-Forum - Englisch
ÄHNLICHE FRAGEN: