Stundenprotokoll korrigieren, bitte

ja ich musste die unterrichtsstunde wiedergeben und hab halt was geschrieben und dies wird benotet
würd mich freuen wenn ihr mir sagen könnt, ob ich Fehler drin hab :))
danke im vorraus :)

On Thursday in the last lesson we have corrected our homework.
A worksheet with the title: “The PC: a machine that changed the world”. We read the text sumped it up in German. After we had made with Mrs. Schumacher the topic: with computers in the present and without computers in the past. Later we compared together the graph on page 38. The figure is about the change in share of advertising 2000-
2004. After the break Mrs. Schumacher has dealt us worksheet with which we have looked at. Finally we had to listen to the CD which was on page 39.