Englsicher Text! bitte korrigieren

ich soll in englisch bis morgen einen englischen text abgeben. Also ich sollte übe meine sportaktivitäten erzählen. Nur weiß ich nicht ob das auch so richtig ist :S. Wäre nett wenn jemand helfen würde. Danke im Vorraus! :D


My name is Tina.I am 16 years old. Today I want to tell you something about my little live sport. Short edge before I was "fun sports" in the club logged in.. Sports-fun is a club where there are numerous sports facilities. There are about 120 sports in the sport-fun offers. There are a total of 39 fun-sports-club in hamburg. I usually go to the sport fun-in Bergedorf. The sports are defined in a weekly schedule. The weekly schedule is structured so that it is pleasant and unforgettable. So I`ll gladly CardioFit, BBRP and Pilates. Cardiofit is a cardio workout to music that contains elements of step aerobics.
BBRP is a form of fitness training with the target point, the strengthening of the abdomen, legs, back and buttocks to strengthen.
Plilates is a physical and mental training that is geared to address the body as a whole, so that the muscles are trained in balance. The flowing exercises increase the elasticity and agility.

Now we come to the dance.
I dance since I was 10 years old. With 12 years I have registered in a dance school, but I stopped after a time. Then I started with 14 years and since I dance salsa 2 times a week in the Lola-Rogge-Schule. But now I want to try a new dance form, and then I found the jazz dance. Of course you know jazz as a genre but as a dance style I could not imagine so well this was all the more aroused my interest. I asked at my dance teacher. I wanted to try it absolutely, and now I dance jazz-dance for about 3 weeks. Jazz dance is one in
the United States resulting form of contemporary dance. Originally, the musical was based on the jazz music, and today`s generally the top title in the pop charts used. The jazz.dance developed from zahlosen dance styles. An essential part African-American dance styles in the 19 century came to America with slaves.
I think, of course, not always time for all my sports activities. But still I try to nehemen DFIE time, which is not always easy. But I have learned from Kurtz. wichitg that sport is for life and especially for health. Everyone should do sports but never overdo it.