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Englisch Text in der Vergangenheit

Frage: Englisch Text in der Vergangenheit
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Hallo ihr lieben ich soll diesen Englisch Text in die Vergangenheit schrieben hab schon was verändert aber ich glaube da fehlt noch was ?

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You are having a terrible day.
First you oversleep, then as you hurry to the kitchen for some breakfast you trip over the dog and it bites your ankle. The wound bleeds a lot, so your mother bandages it and takes you to the doctor’s. You sit in the waiting room for an hour, and the ankle swells and hurts. When the doctor sees it he refers you to the hospital for an X-ray, On the way there your mother’s car runs out of petrol. You hop to a bus-stop and just catch a bus, then your mother finds she has left her purse in the car. The conductor lets you stay on the bus an he feels, sorry for you, and it’s not far to the hospital. After another long wait your turn finally comes. A nurse gives you an injection. As she jabs the needle in, it breaks. She then wheels you to X-ray department and arranges for you to go home in an ambulance afterwards. Your ankle is only sprained and the dog-bite is not too serious, but the doctor tells you to rest for a couple of days. This strikes you as good news – till it occurs to you that you plan to go to an open – air concert tomorrow. When you get home you try to phone your girl – friend to explain, but no one answers the phone.

Von mir verändert in Vergangenheit:

You are having a terrible day. First you oversleep, then as you hurry to the kitchen for some breakfast you trip over the dog and it bites your ankle. The wound bleeds a lot, so your mother bandages it and takes you to the doctor’s. You sat in the waiting room for an hour, and the ankle swelled and hurts. When the doctor sawit he refers you to the hospital for an X-ray, On the way there your mother’s car ran out of petrol. You hop to a bus-stop and just caught a bus, then your mother found she has left her purse in the car. The conductor lets you stay on the bus an he felt, sorry for you, and it’s not far to the hospital. After another long wait your turn finally came. A nurse gave you an injection. As she jabs the needle in, it broke. She then wheels you to X-ray department and arranges for you to went home in an ambulance afterwards. Your ankle is only sprained and the dog-bite is not too serious, but the doctor told you to rest for a couple of days. This struck you as good news – till it occurs to you that you plan to went to an open – air concert tomorrow. When you got home you try to phone your girl – friend to explain, but no one answers the phone.
Frage von Steffi_Pippi | am 02.02.2011 - 10:55

 
Antwort von GAST | 02.02.2011 - 11:44
Zitat:
You are having a terrible day. First you oversleep,
then as you hurry to the kitchen for some breakfast you trip over the dog and it bites your ankle. The wound bleeds a lot, so your mother bandages it and takes you to the doctor’s. You sat in the waiting room for an hour, and the ankle swelled and hurts. When the doctor saw it he refers you to the hospital for an X-ray, On the way there your mother’s car ran out of petrol. You hop to a bus-stop and just caught a bus, then your mother found she has left her purse in the car. The conductor lets you stay on the bus and he felt, sorry for you, and it’s not far to the hospital. After another long wait your turn finally came. A nurse gave you an injection. As she jabsthe needle in, it broke. She then wheels you to X-ray department and arranges for you to GO home in an ambulance afterwards. Your ankle is only sprained and the dog-bite is not too serious, but the doctor told you to rest for a couple of days. This struck you as good news – till it occurs to you that you plan to GO to an open – air concert tomorrow. When you got home you try to phone your girl – friend to explain, but no one answers the phone.


Du musst alle Verben in die Vergangenheit setzen!(ich habe die, die du ausgelassen hast fett gekennzeichnet.
Achtung nach "to" steht der Infinitiv (hier 2 x "go" statt dein "went")

Du siehst, du hast knapp die Hälfte geschafft. Weiter so.

old-but-alert


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Antwort von Steffi_Pippi | 02.02.2011 - 13:12
Ich hoffe ich hab jetzt alles richtig gemacht ?


You was having a terrible day. First you overslept, then as you hurried to the kitchen for some breakfast you tripped over the dog and it bit your ankle. The wound bled a lot, so your mother bandaged it and takes you to the doctor’s. You sat in the waiting room for an hour, and the ankleswelled and hurt. When the doctor saw it he referred you to the hospital for an X-ray, On the way there your mother’s car ran out of petrol. You hopped to a bus-stop and just caught a bus, then your mother found she had left her purse in the car. The conductor let you stay on the bus an he felt, sorry for you, and was not far to the hospital. After another long wait your turn finally comes. A nurse gave you an injection. As she jabbed the needle in, it broke. She then wheeled you to X-ray department and arranged for you to go home in an ambulance afterwards. Your ankle was only sprained and the dog-bite was not too serious, but the doctor told you to rest for a couple of days. This struck you as good news – till it occurred to you that you planned to go to an open – air concert tomorrow. When you got home you tried to phone your girl – friend to explain, but no one answered the phone.


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Antwort von Steffi_Pippi | 02.02.2011 - 14:40
kann mir jetzt jemand Bitte sagen ob der Text richtig in die Vergangenheit geschrieben ist ?


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Antwort von Steffi_Pippi | 02.02.2011 - 19:03
kann mir keiner weiter helfen?

 
Antwort von GAST | 02.02.2011 - 19:08
Zitat:
You WERE having a terrible day. First you overslept, then as you hurried to the kitchen for some breakfast you tripped over the dog and it bit your ankle. The wound bled a lot, so your mother bandaged it and TOOK you to the doctor’s. You sat in the waiting room for an hour, and the ankle swelled and hurt. When the doctor saw it he referred you to the hospital for an X-ray, On the way there your mother’s car ran out of petrol. You hopped to a bus-stop and just caught a bus, then your mother found she had left her purse in the car. The conductor let you stay on the bus AND he felt, sorry for you, and was not far to the hospital. After another long wait your turn finally CAME. A nurse gave you an injection. As she jabbed the needle in, it broke. She then wheeled you to X-ray department and arranged for you to go home in an ambulance afterwards. Your ankle was only sprained and the dog-bite was not too serious, but the doctor told you to rest for a couple of days. This struck you as good news – till it occurred to you that you planned to go to an open – air concert THE NEXT DAY. When you got home you tried to phone your girl – friend to explain, but no one answered the phone.


So, jetzt passt es

old-but-alert

Sorry: ich hatte den Text erst korrigiert und dann nachträglich in die "Quotations" hineinkopiert; dabei sind die Korrekturen verloren gegangen; ich habe sie mit Grossbuchstgaben nachträglich noch mal eingefügt.


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Antwort von Steffi_Pippi | 02.02.2011 - 19:10
Ich bedanke mich sehr für Ihre Hilfe =)

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