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The story of apartheid is still prevailing at the present time in south africa.
In fact, blacks and white have the same rights on the paper, however, the results of more than 40 years of persistent racial segregation are still to be seen today. The white population lives in secured mansions in affluent parts of the city, while the majority of Blacks have to live in slums in suburbs, so called townships. Under apartheid they were forced to settle there and this situation hasn’t changed until today. Many whites have prejudices against blacks and say that they are lazy, stupid and criminal. Indeed, the crime is clearly higher in the townships than in the cities, however, these sad statistics are a home-made problem: While the white population has well-paid employment in clean offices, the blacks have to take over dirty jobs at rock bottom levels. The teaching quality in the schools of the townships is also miserable even today, almost no black child is able to attent the universities which could allow them a better future and profession.
Frage von Cheburaschka (ehem. Mitglied) | am 05.05.2010 - 16:29


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Antwort von zeY (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.05.2010 - 16:37
the so called

say they are lazy
[the] crimequality in schools
hardly no black child
would give them a better future


so das würde ich sagen


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.05.2010 - 16:43
Apartheid (wieso story?) still prevails in South Africa (geographische Namen groß) at present (Reihenfolge: Art und Weise, Ort, Zeit). In fact, blacks and white have the same rights on paper, however, the results of more than 40 years of persistent racial segregation can still be seen today (is to be heißt sollen). The white population lives in secured mansions in the affluent parts of the cities (ist ja nicht nur eine), while the majority of blacks has to live in slums in the suburbs, the so-called townships. Under the apartheid they were forced to settle there and this situation has not changed until today. Many whites have prejudices against blacks and believe that they are lazy, stupid and criminal. Indeed, the crime rate in the townships is clearly higher than in the cities. However, these sad statistics are a home-made problem: While the white population has well-paid employments in clean offices, the blacks have to take on dirty jobs at rock-bottom wages. The teaching quality in the schools of the townships is also miserable even today, almost no black child is able to attend a university, which could allow them a better future and profession.


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Antwort von Cheburaschka (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.05.2010 - 17:00
Vielen Dank für eure Hilfe!

Ich möchte noch einen Satz einfügen, weiß aber nicht, ob er grammatikalisch korrekt ist:

There are still "black" and "white" restaurants, clubs and bars. The different races are under themselves (sind unter sich) and mix only seldom. The crass social contrasts and the direct coexistence from poor and rich promote the crime, so that whites avoid places which claimed by blacks because they are afraid to be attacked or to be robbed by them.


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.05.2010 - 17:16
unter sich bleiben: to stick with one`s kind
stark contrast = krasser Kontrast

coexistence of

promote crime (ohne Artikel)

places which are claimed (sonst haste doch gar kein Verb)

afraid of being attacked or robbed

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