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Our modern society has got used to the fact that the oil goes without saying, like water which belongs to a natural component of our world. But in the years 1973 and 1980 there had been two big oil crises, which have pointed out how strongly the Western industrial nations are dependent on oil. An oil crisis occurs if more oil is used than is available. So these crises have led to a high increase of the oil prices in the industrial countries.
Because the oil reserves of the earth are limited it is to assume that in future there will be a final oil crisis. Statistically our oil reserves will last about another 30 years. The oil production will decrease in the next years, because there won`t be any more big, new discoveries. However the demand on oil is constantly increasing while the oil resources are on the decline.
Above all the growing world economy has led to the fact that we stand now in the turning point of the oil age, to the so-called Paek Oil, and approximate to the final oil crisis. The rising demand for energy can be hardly satisfied. Now the time has come to invest in lasting energy and efficiency to be armed early for the coming circulations.
However, they will not give so much energy like oil (and coal / natural gas), because their density is too low and their required space is too big. Thus we must also learn to life more modestly - and may try not to cling as long as possible to the standard of living the today`s abundance and waste-oriented society.
A crisis like this break in all areas of life and forces us to change our lifestyle. Many people will not be able to afford a car because they will not be able to pay for the high fuel prices. Generally an oil crisis also means a global energy crisis. The consequence is an essential rise in price of the goods of all kind which become unaffordable for most people.