Eurokom Referat verbesserung BITTEE

hallo ich habe morgen mein eurokom prüfung. Ich habe meine referat schon fertig aber bitte um verbesserung.

Mein Thema ist Dubai--> Burj al Arab.


My topic today is the wonderful luxury hotel Burj al Arab in Dubai.
And here you can see my otuline from my topic.

Outline

1. Emirate and city Dubai
-where it is
- the habitanst
2. Burj al Arab
-meaning
-height
-year of construction
-rooms
-levels
-elevators
-restaurants
-prise

3. the circuit
-my argument


Now at first i will tell you something about the emirate Dubai and about the city Dubai. Dubai is one of the seven emirates of the Arabian Peninsula at Persian Gulf.
The city Dubai lies on the northern edge of the emirate Dubai. But it is divided by the dubai creek in two districts, namely bur Dubai and deira.
85% of the habitants the emirate dubai live in the city dubai, because the city is veriy importent by reason of economy, politicy and sociality.


Burj Al Arab

Now i will tell you somethihg about the town landmark by dubai. Burj al arab is one the most luxurios and most expensive hotel in the world. Construction of this hotel began in 1994 and ended in 1999.The design of the tower is in the form of a sail by the 28th Stick to the land side mounted heliport (210 m) and the added height of 200 meters to the lakeside prominent restaurant.
The hotel is located on an artificial island.
The original plan was to build the hotel directly on the coast and not on an artificial island, but that plan was rejected because the building would have cast too much shade on the beach.

All the hotel raiting systems have 5 star maximum, but burj al arab is referred as 7 star hotel from media.
Burj al arab have alltogether 202 rooms the are suits with a square metre between 169 and 780.
The wonderful hotel have 60 levels, 18 elevators and 8 restaurants. For this hotel was used 8.000 beaten gold. The prise ist starts by 1900 euro per night.

I personelly find the hotel is very charming, but unfortunatly too expensive. I hope that you like my presentation. And many thanks for you listening.



Ich habe bestimmt viele fehler :( bitte um schnelle verbesserung:(

vielen dank.
GüL