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Frage: suche jm der meine englischhausaufaben korrigieren kann
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Wie sollten Abomination in der Schule lesen und eine Inhaltsangabe schreiben. Nun hatten wir Kapitel 36 bis 50 auf. Die muss ich am Montag auf englisch vorlesen. Da mein englisch aber nicht so gut ist, wollte ich mal fragen, ob mal jemand meiner Fehler (die bestimmt in Massen auftreten) beseitigen kann.


36.Martha
Martha and Scott go out in the cellar, when Abomination set up a howl. But she showed Scott not the family secret. When Martha was little she thought the monster was Mary. And in the morning there was no Mary, but they have this thing in the cellar.

37.Scott
Scott was in bed by nine but he couldn´t sleep. He think of bits of Martha´s house and the situation on the step to the cellar. Scott has an idea. He will manged to contact Mary on the internet. He typed a message of a site that Martha Dewhurst would like to hear from her sister Mary.

38.Martha
Martha called the number from a child helpline. She couldn´t talk with the person on the telephon and Martha hungup.

39.Scott
Scott will meet up with Martha again because he found out the truth. Scott got to her place around seven fifteen and hundred on the door with both fists. But nobody oppened the door. The howling form Abomination started again. Scott saw Martha coming up.

40.Martha
Martha was glad and mad then she saw Scott. Scott asked if in this home is a Vampier. Martha say that Scott musstn´t tell anyone else about them. Martha have though lods of times about telling someone but her parents got into trouble. Martha tell that Abomination.

41.Scott
Martha talks with Scott again about Abomination. She asks, what she should do. But Scott doesn´t know it and he advius her that she talks with an adult. She tells him that the boy is Mary´s child and she tris to explain why the child isn´t by his mother. At the end they go to Martha home.

42.Martha
Martha gives Scott the postcards of Mary and he reads them. Scott is shocked and asks how she was able to hit hellanyone else her secret. Martha explain him. Scott asks her it he should try to contact Mary with the internet and he tells her everythink about the child. Martha isn´t sure what she showld do.

43.Scott
Martha eats with her parents evening meal. Her father asks she about the walk and the to do that again. He explains the forbidn with the argument that Abomination is restless andd so be needs more attention. Martha tells her father, that boy only nedds a mother and she dosn´t know what the mother would do, if she know what happen.

44.Martha
The parents of Scott have noticed, that he feels bad and that he had a nighmare when they ask Scott, he says that he is fine. They assue him that he can come to them with his problems.

45.Scott
Martha´s parents don´t at Martha go to school. She decided to let Scott searen for Mary in the internet, but because she is at home. She con not tek him and that annoys her. Her father and her postcards of Mary in her room, they are very angry and the father beat her, but after a short talk with he mother he came back to Martha, who is bying on the bed and cries. He dabs away her tears. He do it because he know that he has lot.

46.Scott
Scott was worried when Martha didn´t trun up at school. At scholl the other students bulling Scott because of Martha. Back at home, Scott wrote a message in a cyber cafe it anyone know Mary Dewhurst.

47.Martha
Martha has a conflict with her motner. Martha accuse her moter that she and her father send Mary away. But Martha´s mother say that was the act of the Righteous becouse Mary is nno good. The mother explain that the Lord has shown how the child might soon be baptized and live a normal life. But Martha say that she because her normal life, been bullied at school. Than she push out off the house.

48.Martha
The students at school make tuen of Martha because she wasn´t yesteday at school. But Martha and Scott defend the first time and the other don´t came near a break. Martha tell Scott that they have got to find Mary and that Scott use the internet. She say that her father has stopped beating.

49.Scott
Scott went to the park and walked beside the river. He think about Martha and that he love her. He imagined Martha there besid him. And than he think about the six years old child in the cellar.

50.Martha
When Martha walkes in the kitchen, her mother was showing stuff in cardboord boxes. Martha her that they will morning and it´s all Martha´s fault. They found a house to rent in Wharton. Martha threats that she will tell the police and everyone abot the kid because she don´t want move in a new city.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 04.04.2009 - 14:24

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.04.2009 - 14:36
die ersten Kapitle könnt ihr euch folgendermaßen angucken und durchlesen (fals meine Inhaltsangabe total daneben ging)


Kapitel 36 http://foto.arcor-online.net/palb/alben/87/6343987/1024_6266353232623634.jpg

Kapitel 37 http://foto.arcor-online.net/palb/alben/87/6343987/1024_3033643539653363.jpg

Kapitel 38 http://foto.arcor-online.net/palb/alben/87/6343987/1024_3737633338306437.jdg

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Antwort von GAST | 05.04.2009 - 17:40
hat wirklich keiner zeit?


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Antwort von Banihasi (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.04.2009 - 17:51
Naja, es ist die Fülle, die einen erschlägt :/

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