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Dear Hanif Kureishi (KEIN KOMMA O.Ä. IM ENGLISCHEN)

I have read your story ”My son the fanatic” in the book ”0ne Language Many Voices” and I liked it A LOT. In my opinion it is the best story IN thE book KEIN KOMMA because it takes place in the 20TH/21st century,
WHICH IS where we live NOW. THE main themes KOMMA for example the problems of immigrants in today‘s multicultural Britain and the destructive role of religious fanaticism KOMMA are very APPEALLING? INTERESTING?.

Auf KEINEN Fall "attractive", das bezieht sich auf äußere Schönheit. Eine Frau kann "attractive" sein, aber keine Geschichte. ;)

THE father-son relationship AS WELL is interesting because Parvez, the father KOMMA and Ali, the son KOMMA have a religious conflict.

In ”My son the fanatic" KOMMA Ali‘s metamorphosis was very ----- vielleicht: INTERESTING TO FOLLOW?---- and I liked it for the simple reason that the tension rises all the time. During the reading I had no problems to understand the story KEIN KOMMA because the language was easy. Another reason why I liked this story is the CLASH between the two INTERPRETATIONS OF THE SAME religion and how people FOLLOWING this religion behave.

Wir haben in der Geschichte ja nicht zwei Religionen, sondern zwei unterschiedlich strenge Auslegungen derselben Religion bei Vater und Sohn. :)

The end of this short story CAME unexpected and I don’t think that Parvez would hit Ali SEMIKOLON at the beginning he is worrieD about his son and loves him. THE question at the end of the story ”So who’s the fanatic now” KOMMA THOUGH KOMMA is very interesting, because there isn’t a SIMPLE ANSWER and every reader can answer THIS QUESTION FOR HIM- OR HERSELF.

What is your answer to this question?

Darf ich mal sagen: die Frage ist super!

At the end of my letter I want to ask you some questions. Where is ALI`S MOTHER and why the doesn’t the reader learn something about her? How did you COME UP WITH THE IDEA FOR this story SEMIKOLON and WHY DID YOU MAKE IT END SO NEGATIVELY, WITH Parvez hitTING his son?


Super Brief, super Hausaufgabe. Ich habe nur sehr wenige Fehler gefunden - inhaltlich alles bestens! :)