Englisch, bitte mal Korrekturlesen ^^

Hey. Konnt ihr meine Zusammenfassungen vom 3. Kapitel Fahrenheit 451 leseŽn und verbessern? Vielleicht hat ja noch jemand das Buch gelesen und kann mir ein paar Verbesserungsvorschläge geben oder wichtige Details nennen, die ich unter Umständen vergessen haben?

Danke schon mal:

Part One
In the first part of the third chapter Montag has to burn his own house. Beatty orders him to do that. Mildred had put the alarm, but before the neighbours put the alarm, too.
Montag has to burn his house very slowly and should use the flame thrower.
Faber, who is still in the ear, because of the miniature radio, tells him to run away, but Guy canŽt by reason his fears for the Hound. After the procedure, Beatty notices the radio in MontagŽs ear. He wants to get them, but Montag wouldnŽt give him the radio.
Montag take the flame thrower and liquefies Beatty. After that, when the Mechnical Hound arrive, he try to destroy him, too. Guy runs away, the police is after him. With great exertion he reaches a gas station. He enteres the menŽs washroom and washes himself. The he hears a radio voice, which said, that the war has been declared. On his run he is thinking a lot, especially of Clarisse and her death and Mrs. Black.

Part 2:
The second part is about the escape of Montag and his talking with Faber.
On his way Guy ultimately arrives at the house of Faber. After a short conversation, in which Montag tells him about the incidents, Faber advises Montag to run in the countryside.
In the Tv the see that the police and the Mechnical Hound are after Guy. He gets some dirty clothes of FaberŽs ones and runs away. He stops at a river, where he puts on the dirty clothes and floats downstream. When the Hound arrives at the river, Montag isnŽt there any longer.
After a while he follows a railroad, notices that Clarisse walked there once a time.

Part 3:
In the third and last part of the third chapter and also of the whole book Montag meets congenial people, who likes him and want that Montag lives there with them.
After walking down the road he discovers a group of men, who are called the “Hobos”. They are very friendly to Guy. Due to the television reports they know him. So Montag and the other men sit in front of a Tv and see and hear what the police are doing. By reason that the police didnŽt catch Montag, the Mechnical Hound attack an innocent passer-by, declare that the man is Montag and now he is dead. The “Hobos” are five men: Reverend Padover, the author Granger and the professors Clement, Simmons and West. They invite Montag to join them, when he has a book for all of them. He offers the Book of Ecclesiastes. In the meantime the war is over and the books ends with hope.