english text korrigieren
Frage: english text korrigieren(17 Antworten)
kann es mir mal jemand bitte korriegieren? ich glaub ich hab ein bisschen viel fehler xD :S Paul is 17 years old, and lives in South America in Chile. |
| GAST stellte diese Frage am 29.10.2008 - 17:48 |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 17:51 |
"but dass seine eltern nach chile gekommen sind, als er 1 jahr alt war? |
| Antwort von GAST | 29.10.2008 - 17:53 |
ja^^ das sie halt ausgewandert sind ales er 1 jahr alt war xD |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 17:53 |
und noch was ganz wichtiges... HE, SHE, IT - DAS S MUSS MIT! immer merken ^^ und es heißt immer "IS going". |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 17:54 |
achso, okay... dann vielleicht besser: his parents immigrated to Chile when he was 1 year old ;) |
| Antwort von GAST | 29.10.2008 - 17:55 |
aha okee danke :) ^^ |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 17:57 |
ja, dann fänd ich bei "However he can’t speak Swiss because his parents haven’t taught him" folgendes stilistisch schöner: "Despite of living there 16 years now he isn`t able to talk Swiss, because he never learned" oder "his parents missed teaching him". |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 18:00 |
"He could be shaved off his hair to a bald head." was ist daaas? :D |
| Antwort von GAST | 29.10.2008 - 18:02 |
mein mathelehrer hatte mir gesagt ich soll es schreiben xD das sollte eigentlich heissen dass er eine glatze hat. |
| Antwort von 0_0 | 29.10.2008 - 18:03 |
Paul is 17 years old and lives in South America in Chile. Actually he is a Swiss but he and his parents are immigrated to Chile. Moreover he cannot speak Swiss because his parents never taught him. His hobbies are meeting his friends, listening to music, and playing football. His favourite music is Hip-Hop and his favourite clothes are hoodie sweaters. (He could be shaved off his hair to a bald head. sinn?). When he goes to the city, he sits in a train or when he goes to the school, he always listens to music with his Ipod. Music is very important for him, because he can take it easy with him. Paul has got a five years old brother and a three years old sister. Sometimes he irritates them even though he loves them. |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 18:04 |
O_O, du hast teilweise den sinn verfälscht ^^ ich probiers au ma :D |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 18:06 |
Paul is 17 years old and lives in South America in Chile. Actually he is a Swiss, but his parents immigrated to Chile when he was 1 year old. Despite of living there 16 years now, he isn`t able to talk Swiss, because his parents missed teaching him. His hobbies are meeting his friends, listening to music and playing football. His favorite music is Hip-Hop and his favorite clothes are Pullovers with Baggys. On top of that, he is bald. When he goes to the city or when he sits in a train or when he goes to school, he always listens to music with his IPod. Music is very important for him, because he can take it easy with it. Paul has a brother who is five years old and a three-years-old sister. Sometimes they are irritating even though he loves them. |
| Antwort von 0_0 | 29.10.2008 - 18:06 |
ja gut das mit dem einem jahr hab ich vergessen, kann man ja noch dazufügen. ansonsten ist das zu viel geschwafel, kann man weglassen oder kürzer fassen. |
| Antwort von Aurinko90 (ehem. Mitglied) | 29.10.2008 - 18:07 |
sie`s 14, da schwafelt man noch o.O |
| Antwort von 0_0 | 29.10.2008 - 18:09 |
jo, aber verbessern kann mans trotzdem. soll ja gut sein^^ |
| Antwort von matata | 29.10.2008 - 18:10 |
Actually he is Swiss..... ________________________ e-Hausaufgaben.de - Team |
| Antwort von GAST | 29.10.2008 - 18:31 |
ein wenig schadensbegrenzung: paul is 17 years old and lives in south america, in chile. actually, he was born in switzerland but he and his parents moved to chile when he was 1 year old. in spite of being born in switzerland, he is not able to speak swiss, because his parents never taught him. he also has a 5 year old brother and a 3 year old sister, who irritate him sometimes, but apart from that, he really loves them. pauls hobbies are: hanging around with friends, listening to music and playing football. his favorite type of music is hip hop and so he likes to wear pullovers with casual baggy pants. on top of that,he is bald. paul always listens to music from his ipod: when he goes to the city or school, or when he sits in the train. it makes him having a better feeling and taking life more easily. |
| Antwort von GAST | 19.11.2008 - 21:06 |
Paul is 17 y and lives in South America in Chile. Actually he was born in switzerland, but his parents took him with them to Chile when he was one year old. Well, he can’t speak Swiss because his parents didn`t teach him. His hobbies are meeting his friends, listening to music and playing football. He loves Hip-Hop music and the style Hip-Hopers have, so he prefers wearing baggy pants. When he drives to town or to shcool he always sits in the train with his ipod. Music is very important for him, because he can do thing easier with it. Paul has got a brother he is 5 years old and a sister she is 3 years old. Sometimes get on his nerves but all in all he loves them. |
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