kann einer mein eglisch durchschauen ..?

Hallo wir mussten in Englisch etwas neues erfinden und eine Dokumentation drüber schreiben nur leider bin ich mir nicht ganz sicher wie gut die ist? wär lieb wenn einer mal drüber schaut ;-)

The product our group is presenting is the „U-chip“, the next step of communication technology in the 21st centrury.
It contines the advatanges of a mobile phone a Mp3-player, adigital camera, an USB-Stick, a navigation applince and a 4D beamer.

The idea of this gadget („U-chip“) was created of ...... In the beginning this gadget was also able to teleport goods in a bag inside the „U-chip“ of the user bought in the internet for insout use. This idea just seamed kid of unreal tu us, so we simply crossed it out. Instead of this we added another technical appliance to our „Uchip“, a beame. Now some people may say, „Oh yes a beamer is much more real than a teleport!“, but who cares? So we addded this appliare to our gadget, and there it is: The „U-chip“.

Then we tried to find out, for wich targetgroup we created thies new gadget. And soon we made the choice: To be honest, there is no actual targetgroup. The „U-chip“ can be compared to a new mobile phone, and nearly every person qwns a mobile phone, regardless off age,religion or similar things. ThatŽs the reason why we got no target group, but is case of emergeney you could tell someone that our targetgroup are students and businessmen.

Now IŽll inform you about the innovation of the „U-chip“ in comparing it to todays mobile phones.
Similar to these, the „U-chip“ also has a navigation system, a camera, a USB-canect it with your PC and a Mp3-player to hear music whereever you go. Fill this point, the „u-chip“ looks just like another boring mibile phone. So, whatŽs new about this new invention? Well, what abot seeing the one you call while speaking to him? Now itßs possible! The „U-chip“ has second smoller samera ou top of itŽs front to record the callers image and sends it to the called person through out the back-camera to projekt the image in 3D. This futuristic appliance makes the „U-chip“ the newest must-have-gadget in communication technology.

Next think to knwos when exactly did thename of this new invention came from? The simplier the question, the simplier the answer: „U-chip“ is a short form of a combination of the two words „universal“ and „chip“. The use of the word „chip“ isnŽt worth explaining, an even“universal“ could be understand by normal readers. You right recognize that this gadgets neme isnŽt that specialy, but that is a good way to make people remember it.