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Reaching the harbour, Marco, Kitty, Mrs Hume and her brother Charlie Bacon take the next ferry to bury Effing at the sea.
When the ferry passed the Statue of Liberty, Marco opens the urn and shakes the ashes out.After the burial they go back to Effing`s flat to have a last big feast. With the inheritance she has got from Effing, Mrs Hume decides to move to Florida to start a new period of her life.
When Marco and Kitty want to say goodbye to Mrs Hume and her brother, Marco gets a last present from Effing, a bag with more than 7000 $.