Könnt ihr euch bitte das mal anschauen, ob das richtig ist ?

Hallo zusammen!
Habe ja bald die Mündliche Realprüfung in Hamburg.
Und ich soll in Englisch in den Ferien die Themen strukturieren.
Habe auch schon einige Texte zu den Themen, die dran kommen geschrieben ! Wollte euch fragen, ob ihr euch das kurz mal anschauen könnt, ob die Text richtig und okay für die Realprüfung sind ?
Wäre sehr nett von euch !
Vielen Dank im Voraus !
Also das sind noch mal die Themen, die in der Prüfung vor kommen :
Fitness
1- the importance of fitness
2- ways to (get more) fitness
3- what you can do at a fitness centre :courses, equipment...
4- a training plan for various(verschiedene) people
5- ways to better health: eat less and be more active

Teen courts
6- the idea of teen courts in the USA
7-the case of Amanda Jones

Zu 1 habe ich leider noch nichts !
zu 2: ways to (get more)fitness:
If you liked to be fitter, you should go to the fitness centre. If you like no fitness centre, you can jog, swimming, dancing or bicycle driving. If you like sport with other people, you can play football, basketball, baseball, hockey, volleyball or handball.

Zu 3 what you can do at a fitness centre: courses, equipment... :
At a fitness centre you can run on the treadmill or you can step on the stepper or you can use the crosstrainer or a stationary bike. If you don´t like this equipment, you can do Yoga or Airobaics or Kick-Boxing and Tai-Chi. Body-Conditions, Muscle Works, Workout and Selfdefence.

Zu 4 a training plan for various(verschiedene) people:
very thin women : She wants to be stronger
A very thin woman should a one hours Muscle works, half hours Kick- Boxing and half hours Body Conding.

very fat man: He wants to loose weight.
A very big man should a half hours crosstraining, a one hour Airobaics, a half hour Workout and a half hour stepper.

a mother with two children and a half time job with a lot of work

She can one hour yoga , one hour Tai- Chi, half hours Selfdefence and half hours Salsa Airobaics.

Zu 5 ways to better health: eat less and be more active:
If someone want to loose weight he has to burn off a lot of calories. He can eat the same amount of food and then he do a lot of sports or he eat less and be more active. He shouht not eat junk food, not too much sweets, no ice-cream and he doesn´t drink something with sugar like Coke.

Zu 6 The idea of teen courts in the USA:
The idea of teen court is that the court is punished by teenagers and not by adults. In the court works teenager as the judge, the prosecutor, the jury and the lawyers. Teenagers who have comitted minor crimes like for example shoplifting, stealing, smoking in public places or driving offences who have been caught by the police for the first time.
The volunteers have learned how to do the job in special trainig courses.
Years ago young offenders had to appear before the juvenile courts, because the bad teenagers had problems to get a job.

Zu 7 the case of Amanda Jones :
Amanda Jones is sixteen years old. She works after school at Jensen´s Pizza House for 20 hours a week and during the summer for 35 hours a week. Amanda is a very good student. She plans to go to college. She wants to learn Spanish. She is a member of the Spanish Club and a member of the high scholl volleyball team for two years.
Amanda Jones was arrested at 11:52am for three counts of retail theft. A Qmart employee saw Amanda going into the ladies´dressing rooms with a blue skirt and a bikini. Amanda left the dressing rooms carrying only her purse. The employee couldn´t find the clothes in the dressing rooms and called security. Amanda was taken to the manager´s office where she broke down. She had put on the clothes under her own clothing and tried to leave.
When the police arrived, they asked for identification and found a bottle of Spring Flowers Perfume with a new sales tag. Amanda admitted that she had taken this bottle from Bennett´s, a small department store. Amanda´s purse was checked and the police found two pairs of earrings with sales tags from Carter´´s, a small boutique. Amanda admitted that she had not paid for these items. The police officer also found Amanda´s wallet with $85 in cash. He asked why Amanda hadn´t just paid for the items. Amanda said that she was planning to buy a picture for her parents´ wedding anniversary the following day. Amanda´s parents were called and later Amanda stated that all her girlfriends did this and they never got caught. One of the girls had threatened her and asked her to bring items with the sales tags still on them to prove that she hadn´t paid for them. It was dumb but she did it and she was sorry.

Und dann haben wir noch ein drittes Thema:
Drugs and sports
8-taking illegal drugs-a workdwide problem
9-drugs in sports in history(Olympic Games...)
10-and nowadays(Tour de France,...)
11-taking food supplements
(was könnte ich hier vielleicht zu den Unterthemen schreiben ?
Habt ihr vielleicht eine Idee?

lg.Sabrina