Korrektur pls:)

Ich habe hier eine Inhaltsangabe geschrieben, ich hoffe ihr könnt sie für mich korregieren, wäre echt super nett :)

Summary

Tom and Susi Sanders live with their children on Bainbridge Iceland, near New York City is located.
Tom is in hurry, because he doesn`t want too late at work. Because today is Toms great day, today he is perhaps promote. He is currently taking a shower when his wife asked him, to look after the children. He should namely feed the children, but he can`t feed them now, because otherwise he misse his ferry, which go in 20 minutes away, so when he miss the ferry, he has to take the ferry around 8:20 then he appear too late, and he is will look very bad. Susan, as a lawyer, can`t take care of the children, because she has to go to a doctor.Susan convince him and asks Tom again, to feed the children. So he stay home and look after the children. It is already 8:00, while he is trying to call the office, as soon as his wife suddenly comes, he is in hurry and tries for the ferry at 8:20. If he wants to succeed, he must quickly hurry.

Das wars ich hoffe ihr könnt sie korrigieren...
Wenn es euch nichts ausmacht, würdet ihr bitte auch auf die Zeit achten, ich muss nämlich in Gegenwart schreiben.
DANKE, euch :)