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Hey könnt ihr den Text kurz mal durchlesen und Verbesserungsvorschläge machen?! Danke


Historical and political Facts
1600-1990

the Dutchman Jan van Riebeeck had built on the cape of good hope a victualling station by order of the east India company.
This was a rest station for ships.
The colony, which is slowly increased was in Dutch-owned.
The settlers dispread in western cape up to the Khoikhoi and taking their land.
After 1770 the settlers reached in the east the frontier of Bantu and they had series of war with the people of the Xhosa.
The forces of Great britain occupied the region cape of good hope. The cape becomes a british colony. The Dutch settlers want to escape from the domination of british.
The discovery of diamonds has led to strong economic growth and immigration of many Europeans.
Then their was a war between Britain and the independent Dutch colonies.
Frage von eiskuesschen (ehem. Mitglied) | am 05.02.2008 - 16:40


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Antwort von YerPirate (ehem. Mitglied) | 05.02.2008 - 17:30
... the colony, which was slowly increased was dutch-owned...


danach in dem satz fehlt ein verb, vllt. meintest du auch came up?
und danach took their land
after 1770 the settlers reached the frontier of Bantu in the east
war with/against
the cape became a british colony
the dutch settlers wanted
teh discovery of diamonds led/had led


und vllt. satzanfänge n bissl variieren nicht immer nur this, then, the

 
Antwort von GAST | 05.02.2008 - 18:21
ich glaub so klingts besser =)the Dutchman Jan van Riebeeck had built a victualling station on the cape of good hope by order of the east India company

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