Englisch profis gesucht!

Hallo Leute,
Ich brauch mal wieder jemanden der meinen Englisch text durchschaut & korrigiert, als belohnung gibts 10 credits.

Dann danke schon mal & man schreibt sich!


To become a Soldier?

Selene came from school and she had big news for her mother.
She opened the door and went to the kitchen where her mom with a cigarette sat.

Selene: Hey Mom!
Mom: Hi Honey!
Selene: What’s up mom? Why do you look so sad?
Mom: Well, when I go to the work today my boss told me that I must sleep with him or he would dismiss (feuern/ entlassen) me from my job.
Selene: What?
Mom: Yes, he said it. But I said that I have a daughter, a family and a life. He didn’t understand what I mean. He looked at me like a little squirrel.
Selene: And what happened next?
Mom: I told him that I won’t sleep with him and that I would go now. He said that I’m dismissed. So I went at home 1 hour ago.
Selene: Oh, Mom…. I’m so sorry.
Mom: It’s okay Honey.

A little tear run through Moms face.

Selene: Oh, Mom… please don’t cry. There will be better times not like these days.

Mom wiped the tear from her face.

Mom: Okay…

Mom smiled a little bit to Selene.

Mom: What do you want to eat?
Selene: Lasagne. Yeah… I want to eat Lasagne.
Mom: Okay. I make a Lasagne for you.
Selene: Thank you Mom.
Mom: So, what was your day like? Are there any news which I must know?
Selene: Yes, Mom. Today was Occupational consultation. The teacher and some other persons showed us some jobs like pilot, teacher, soldier, strip dancer, moderator and so on.
Mom: Really? So what do you want to become later? A Pilot?
Selene: No, I don’t want to become a pilot. I want to go to the army and become a soldier.

Mom started to laugh loudly, thus as Selene have meant it ironically.

Mom: Hihi… You’re so funny…
Selene: Do you not believe me? I’m serious.
Mom: Are you kidding me?
Selene: No.
Mom: You want to become a soldier?
Selene: Yes.
Mom: Are you serious? Do you know how dangerous this job is?
Selene: Yes, I know it mom and I want to become a soldier.
Mom: But that’s not a job for a like like you!
Selene: A girl like me? What do you mean?
Mom: You are so lovely and cute.
Selene: Lovely and cute? Okay mom, I want to become a soldier because I hate it, when people think that I’m so cute and polite. I hate it mom! I can’t look everyday in the mirror because I hate what I are. I hate that everybody loves me only why I’m pretty, rich and a cheerleader. I want that the people accept the real me.
Mom: Okay, but why don’t you leave the Cheerleaders?
Selene: Why should I do this? I like dancing and express myself. But that’s unimportant. I want to become a soldier, because I want to help people in other countries.
Mom: If you want to do something for your and for other countries then go to the politics.
Selene: I won’t go into politics because there is not enough personally contact and I’m not really interested in.
Mom: But you know that you lost your individuality because you must dress a uniform. So it means that you can’t show your own Style.
Selene: Yes, you’re right but so did I learn what it means to have discipline.
Mom: And discipline in one fact which you need for gun shooting, so I believe that’s not want to kill people or?
Selene: You’re right, I don’t want to kill a person but I need gun shooting also to patronize myself.
Mom: Okay, when you think so but nobody is indentures to be a soldier.
Selene: Yes, clearly. But I want to go voluntary to the army to study there and to make my drive license, because so did the state pay for these things.
Mom: The state pay for it? Is it that what you think, we have enough money and we don’t need the cash from the state.
Selene: I know, but I want to be independently.
Mom: I believe you waste the time of your life.
Selene: Why did I waste time of my life when I study by the army as a soldier?
Mom: You waste time because you can’t apply all these things which you learn there lately. And an other problem is that you neglect your family and your friends.
Selene: Okay Mom, that’s right but so did I find new friends who accept my really so than I are and not like the people now.
Mom: In addition we have so a good relationship and I believe that when you go it will be a stranger relationship like now. I don’t want to lose you, because you are my little Angel, my hope for future and we’ve made so many things all the years ago.
Selene: Oh mom, I love you and no distance could change this. But at first I must think of me and my future. So it’s very important to study by the army, to learn how I could survive in the wilds and to patronize myself or want you that Someone kill me?
Mom: No, but did you believe that you come every weekend at home? I don’t think so, because you must really often move (umziehen) in to other countries.
Selene: I know it mom and that’s okay but I want to find and control myself and you know, that when I don’t feel fine I come back at home.
Mom: Okay, I support you in all things that you want to do and if you have problem you could come or call to me every time and then I will help you.
Selene: You are the best mom of the world, I’m very proud about our decision.

Mom and Selene embrace another and all are happy.