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Hi.
Today I`d like to tell something about my marvellous city called Sonneberg. There`s a lot to report on and I prepared a powerpoint-presentation. So you can keep track of.
History
In the 13th century Sonneberg was founded by minister alien of the dukes of Andechs-Meranien below the castle Sonneberg.
1349 Sonneberg got urban rights of countess Jutta von Henneberg.
From 1826 to 1918 Sonneberg belonged to the dukedom Sachsen-Meiningen.
From the old-established wood goods production the toys production developed from the 16th century.
About 1700 the company Dressel (from 1873 company Cuno and Otto Dressel) the biggest toy exporter was founded in Sonneberg.
Our town became a toys production centre with international standing.

Culture and sights
The toy museum was opened in 1901. Here the visitor finds toys history and can let itself be kidnapped in the time of the children`s days of one`s own.
The "old Sonneberg city hall" is an important historical testimonial in a number of four city halls of which the history of the town certainly was from the 15th century.
This baptistery has been made presumably and therefore the probably oldest lasting work in the Sonneberg room created by human hand in the 9th century.
The municipal gallery Sonneberg was opened in September 1996. Exhibitions are shown to the presence to the forming and applied art here.
A Protestant city church "St.Peter" builds 1843-1845
Roman Catholic city church "St.Stephan" 1903 -- Neo-Romanesque style
The Lutherhaus is an old wholemeal house located at the Schönberg. The legend lasted for a long time, Martin Luther should have stayed in this house, so.
Gives fish, plants and corals from 15 different countries, show aquarium Nautiland to see.
The observatory in Sonneberg new catch is one of the large old observatories rich in tradition in Germany. Archive contained about 250 000 photographic plates this meanwhile an information source of incalculable value is worth.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 01.05.2007 - 13:56


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Antwort von Quiz4fun (ehem. Mitglied) | 01.05.2007 - 13:58
Also ich weß auch nicht,
das klingt wie nen deutscher Vortrag ins Englische übersetzt...

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.05.2007 - 13:59
ist es ja auch! ich will ja nur das in jemand schnell auf Grammatik checkt!

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.05.2007 - 14:01
würdest du mir den Gefallen tun


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Antwort von Quiz4fun (ehem. Mitglied) | 01.05.2007 - 14:02
Schnell? Das ganze Ding ist durchzogen von groben grammatikalischen Fehlern. Ich glaube es wäre besser, wenn du es nochmal neu schreibst - und diesmal ohne Google-Übersetzungsmaschine o.ä..

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.05.2007 - 14:04
Nicht ernsthaft, oder? O_o

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.05.2007 - 14:06
ich kanns nicht besser, bin voll die Niete in Englisch

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