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glaub people gibts nur in einzahl es heißt immer people

hätte ich jetzt nen wörterbuch bei hand würde ich dir gern helfen mit der übersetzung, aber dein text ist soweit ganz ok, nur halt people ohne s

da kommt more dangerously, glaub ich^^

huhu!

my name is marc schömann and I live in neudenau. Today I want to talk about soft adventure.

In the modern world, people are bored of their life, every morning they go to their office where they work until the evening!
After work, the people go home to their wife and the kids where they talk about boring things.

But some of them want to escape the nine-to-fifty lifestyle, so they search for adventures, like surfing, kayaking, bungee jumping,
Climbing, diving or parachuting!

soo würd ichs machn! viel glück wünsch ich dir!

Each year, there is a rising number of new and more exiting extrem sports. Most of them are founded on old ones which have been modefided.

ah k da wer ich zu schnell mitm schreibn danke!

hey letzte frage noch!

wie übersetz ich diesen satz:

Aber eine komplett neue sportart wird vorallem bei jungen leuten immer beliebter. Sie nennt sich "Parkour", bei dieser sportart wird die stadt zu einem sportplatz umfunktioniert in dem man alle hindernisse die einem die stadt in den weg legt überwinden muss!

ps: kann man den satz so stehen lassen oder hört sichs doof an

Zuerst einmal noch ein paar Korrekturen, nur wegen der Sprache.....

my name is marc schömann and I live in neudenau. Today I want to talk about soft adventure.

In the modern world, people are bored of their life, every morning they go to their office where they work till evening!
After work, the people go home to their families where they talk about boring things.
HOWEVER (but nie am satzanfang) some of them want to escape from the nine-to-fifty lifestyle, so they search for adventures, like surfing, kayaking, bungee jumping,
Climbing, diving or parachuting!

ja des heißt people und ich peoples

statt "their wifes and the kids" würd ich "family" sagn

my name is marc schömann and I live in neudenau. Today I want to talk about soft adventure.

In the modern world, people are bored of their life, every morning they go to their office where they work until the evening!
After work, the people go home to their family where they talk about boring things.

But some of them want to escape the nine-to-fifty lifestyle, so they search for adventures, like surfing, kayaking, bungee jumping,
Climbing, diving or parachuting!

They search for exciting things they can do.

Each year, there is a rising number of new and more exiting extrem sports. Most of them are founded on old ones which have been modefided.

However, there is a completely new sport, which gets more and more in favour by the young people. It is called `Parkour`, where the city becomes a sports field, where you have to conquer all barriers, which are lied down by the city itself.

You don’t need any equipment, nad you donŽt need special places, all what you need there, is in the city and your body, you jump from one roof to another, climb the walls up and jump after that down to the buttom.

The parkour pros called themselves “treucour”, you can go to workshops or something else to be one of them.


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so das wäre dann der komplette text!

vlt. findet ihr ja noch fehler oder habt ideen zur egänzung!

also großes danke an alle!