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Könnte mir jemand beu dem Anfang meiner book review helfen? Es muss nur, wenn nötig, berichtigt werden.
As I have seen the book “Ich, Prinzessesin aus dem Hause Al Saud” (I, Princes from home Al Saud) I wasn’t really fill with enthusiasm.
It had a very boring title and layout. But in the end I enjoyed reading the book.
While other young girls in user age have problems with the first kiss, the puberty and the parents, have Sultana more importantlyer problems e.g. how she can explain her father that she is an young woman and want also treat. Do you know that Arab mans can marry several women’s?