Korrektur - Kleine Debatte

Hallo zusammen

Könnt Ihr meine englisch Debatte korrigieren? Ich vermute es hat einige Fehler beim Satzaufbau.

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Thousands of people show up on a concert with full of energy to have their best time of life while others say they enjoy it more through online concert.
The question is which is better attending a concert, or watching the same concert at home?

On the one hand watching a concert at home plays no role where the location is. You save time and money because of the way to the concert.
On the other hand, there are a lot of important aspects missing for example the smell of the location, or the feeling to see the artist with your own eyes.

I enjoy it way more on a live concert because of the energy around and yourself. Of course, it is way more comfortable to watch it at home but it’s also very different like driving a bicycle in a game and actually driving a bicycle in the forest.