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Frage von Esra39 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 05.03.2016 - 16:35


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Antwort von matata | 05.03.2016 - 16:52
Schreib sie ins nächste Antwortfeld, dann wird sie kontrolliert. Üblicherweise arbeiten wir nur im Forum.


Da nützt es auch nichts, wenn du die Frage doppelt stellst. Sie wird gelöscht, und du riskierst eine Verwarnung!


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Antwort von matata | 05.03.2016 - 18:01
Esra39 schrieb auch

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Vienna is a beautiful state to see the different sights, district etc. In Vienna that you have also many shopping centers. The most cultural things are in 1.district. In 1.district you have a St. Stephen`s Cathedral and you can see interesting things. You can also climb up St. Stephen`s Cathedral. For tourist become also information on the guided tours, when will come information about the St. Stephen`s Cathedral. You can also shop with your friends in Vienna. When you will information about the history and anything else of Vienna, you can visit the museums. With a fiaker you can see the streets of Vienna. There are many restaurants for example the traditional restaurants.
When you travel with a bus to airport, then you buy for a ticket 7,60 €. You can also travel with a S-Bahn, it would cost 4,40€. The expensive vehicle of travel is a taxi, it would cost ca. 40 €. When you need return ticket, the cost 24 € for one time.
Vienna has a good public transport. Buses, trains, trams and underground lines will take you anywhere in the city. There are many different types of tickets. In Vienna you have a day ticket. With a day ticket, you can go where ever you want. It is also validated for one day. When you buy a single ticket, it would cost 2,20€. For example: When you will come back at home, then you have to buy a new ticket. It is also expensive for one day. I think best ticket is the weekly travel card, because you can go where ever you want. You buy one time and it is validated for one week. It is cheaper than other tickets.

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Antwort von Seda33 | 05.03.2016 - 18:06
Das andere habe ich von meine Freundins account geschickt. Dann habe ich mir auch ein Konto erstellt. Können Sie es bitte kontrollieren


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Antwort von Seda33 | 05.03.2016 - 18:07
Vienna is a beautiful state to see the different sights, district etc. In Vienna that you have also many shopping centers. The most cultural things are in 1.district. In 1.district you have a St. Stephen`s Cathedral and you can see interesting things. You can also climb up St. Stephen`s Cathedral. For tourist become also information on the guided tours, when will come information about the St. Stephen`s Cathedral. You can also shop with your friends in Vienna. When you will information about the history and anything else of Vienna, you can visit the museums. With a fiaker you can see the streets of Vienna. There are many restaurants for example the traditional restaurants.

When you travel with a bus to airport, then you buy for a ticket 7,60 €. You can also travel with a S-Bahn, it would cost 4,40€. The expensive vehicle of travel is a taxi, it would cost ca. 40 €. When you need return ticket, the cost 24 € for one time.

Vienna has a good public transport. Buses, trains, trams and underground lines will take you anywhere in the city. There are many different types of tickets. In Vienna you have a day ticket. With a day ticket, you can go where ever you want. It is also validated for one day. When you buy a single ticket, it would cost 2,20€. For example: When you will come back at home, then you have to buy a new ticket. It is also expensive for one day. I think best ticket is the weekly travel card, because you can go where ever you want. You buy one time and it is validated for one week. It is cheaper than other tickets.


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Antwort von Seda33 | 07.03.2016 - 12:11
Können Sie bitte meine Hausübung kontrollieren ? :)


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Antwort von matata | 07.03.2016 - 14:46
Da musst du auf einen Englisch-Spezialisten warten...
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Antwort von Zal | 07.03.2016 - 15:16
Vienna is a beautiful city to see different sights, districts etc. In Vienna you also have many shopping centers. The best cultural aspects are in the 1st district. You have for example (vermeide es dich zu wiederholen..) the St. Stephen`s Cathedral and many other interesting things. You can also climb up St. Stephen`s Cathedral. For tourist become also information on the guided tours, when will come information about the St. Stephen`s Cathedral (übersetz das mal ins Deutsche..). You can also shop with your friends in Vienna. If you want to know any information about the history or anything else of Vienna, you can visit the museums. With a fiacre you can see the streets of Vienna. Besides there are many traditional restaurants around Vienne one can visit.

A ticket for a bus travel to the airport costs about 7,60€. You can also travel with the suburban railway (S-Bahn), it would cost 4,40€. The more expensive vehicle for travel is a taxi, it would cost roughly/about 40 €. When you need a return ticket, you pay once 24€.

Vienna has a good public transport. Buses, trains, trams and underground lines will take you to any location in the city (Vienne steht am Anfang des Satzes, das reicht). One also has the possibility to choose from different types of tickets, for example the day ticket. With this ticket, you can go wherever you want to for a whole day. A single ticket would cost 2,20€. This means that when you arrived at home home, you would have to buy a new ticket again for further travel. It is also expensive for one day (was ist teuer? Einzelticket?). I think the best ticket is the weekly travel card, because you can go wherever you want for one week and is overall cheaper compared to the other ones.

Es sind einige Fehler enthalten, habe versucht es schnell zu korrieren, da ich in Eile bin. Lerne für dich selber, "connectives" zu verwenden, damit die Sätze erstens besser klingen und flüssiger zu lesen sind -> bessere Note. Versuche auch wenig aus dem Deutschen zu nehmen (1:1) oder Wort für Wort aus dem Deutschen übersetzen, endet oft katastrophal.

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