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My performance of development of the European Union 

The European Union ( abbreviated : EU) is a union ofstates, they follow same goals.
The European Union exists since the firstnovember in the year 1993. On this day combined twelve states beneath Germanyto the European Union. Before exists a union of european states called „EuropeanCommunity“ but they are other goals as the European Union and they aredifferent organized. Any state in Europe has the possibility to join in theEuropean Union. They must to comply some requirements. One of the mostimportant requirement is, that the stateis democratic. Today the European Unionexists of 28 member states. With the union of states surrender a lot of problems. A big problem is the unemployment in the European Union. In the southern member states there are unemployment rate over 20 percent such as Greece with circa 27 percent and Spain with circa 24,4 percent. especially the young people are concerned. This is a reason that the scissor between rich people and poor people are bigger and bigger.More and more . unemployed   people are less money and saved more on food and heating. The good staff people leave her home, her friends and her family and they go in the lands, where they used and they are good pay. They leave her land about to life in the rich lands of European Union. There can lifes in dignity and decencyin the EU. In the future should rule that the unemployment rate in the European Union as low as possible. Young people should a claim of an   employment or  an education. The member states must be change her   educational   system . From   this   it   follows that not only good staff peoplecomes to the EU but refugees and asylum   seeker comes to the European Union too. This are people,who comes of   third   countries , also country do notbelongs to the European Union and immigrate in the EU. There are two arts ofasylum seeker. The one art are people, their must to leave her home becausethey hunted of   many   kinds and they risk her life. The other art of asylumseeker , they are the biggest part of asylum people, come illegal to the EU.Theylive hidden and secret in the European Union, because they are not registered. Thisis criminal. This problem must be minimize in the future. When refugees or asylum seeker to enter in theEuropean Union, they must be bring particular requirements such as residencepermit or the will to work. The distribution of the refugees in the different memberstates are better regulated.They are even distributed and not that all refugeesimmigrate in one or two countries.It is helpful, that the member states togetherare better work and the accord are better between the states about the topicimmigrate of refugees. Who before holiday inthe EU in an other land did you notice that in the land speak the people another language. The most people in the EU can speak one to two foreign language.The people are often dependent to communicate with hands and foots. There are23 official languages  in the EU. The EUmust be agree of few languages. A next problem is theheight of the different tax and rate of taxes in the single member states. Everystate paid different percentages of taxes.Eleven countries have very low rateof taxes: 15 perecnt less other countries. In the future must paid each memberstate same percentage taxes of gross. The enlargement ofthe European Union brings risks. It must be consider if particular countriesbrings more or less problems in the eu when taken in the eu. Thecooperation of the 28 staates are difficult now. There ist more critism on the EU but im my opinion the problems in the text are the biggest.This problems are minimize in the future.      
Frage von Elisa1995 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 22.03.2015 - 17:30

 
Antwort von ANONYM | 22.03.2015 - 18:14
Dein Text aus dem anderen Thread, in dem du deinen deutschen Aufsatz eingestellt hast:
Zitat:
Die europäische Union (abgekürzt: EU) ist ein Zusammenschluss von Staaten, die gemeinsam politische Ziele verfolgen.
Die europäische Union besteht seit dem 1. November 1993. An diesem Tag haben sich zwölf Staaten darunter auch Deutschland zur europäischen Union zusammengeschlossen. Zuvor gab es  schon einen Zusammmenschluss europäischer Staaten, die sogenannten „Europäische Gemeinschaft“. Sie hatten aber andere Ziele als die EU und war anders organisiert.
 Dein deutscher Text oben mit Google Übersetzer:
Zitat:
The European Union ( abbreviation: EU) is a union of states, which, in common political goals. The European Union has existed since November 1, 1993. On this day, twelve states including Germany joined the European Union. Previously, there was already a Zusammmenschluss European countries , the so-called "European Community" . But they had different goals than the EU and was organized differently .
 Dein neuer Text oben:
Zitat:
The European Union ( abbreviated : EU) is a union of states, they follow same goals. The European Union exists since the first november in the year 1993. On this day combined twelve states beneath Germany to the European Union. Before exists a union of european states called „EuropeanCommunity“ but they are other goals as the European Union and they are different organized.
 


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 22.03.2015 - 18:41
Wenn Du schon diesen Text in Deutsch als Grundlage für Deinen Aufsatz über die Entstehung der EU verwendest, sollstest Du  ihn  NIE  in den Google Übersetzer kopieren und den Schund, der dabei herauskommt, 1:1 übernehmen... So lernst Du nie Englisch es bringt Dir nur schlechte Noten (denn Lehrer können auch googlen...); ich werde mir auch nicht die Mühe machen, das zu korrigieren.

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