Englisch Text Korrektur

Hallo, ich habe einen English Text geschrieben ,das ich den abgeben muss.Nur ich brauche einen der es dann verbessert,damit ich auch weiß wo meine Fehler drin stecken.

Today we discuss about the media.
My English teacher had three question and we mustwrite a short text about the topic. First ofall I´m not addicted.  I have a lot ofmedia at my home, but I didn´t use it every day. If I play computer games, mymum would warn me, that I did spend my time. So I know some of people, who playcomputer games every day, that  theyhaven´t  a real life. For example, my mumwould say to me: “Siyar come we go in the shopping center “. Then I wouldanswer: “No mum, I can´t “. The important thing is, that the kids haven´t lesstime, but if they play computer, then they would have time to play amedia.  Furthermore I not like one media.That´s is the TV. It has all entertainment, shows and you can watch all films,but for me it is very boring to sit in in the couch and watch a movie forhours. It is better, if you would sleep. However media is a special thing forchildren, because they can watch cartoons or play games on tablets. But In myopinion is media for kids very dangerous, because it can be harmful forchildren´s health´s and it can make someone very aggressive, so that the parent’scan´t help the child. So that I hope it would give a extra technology rules forchildren, thereby kids cannot go on every websites or watch all Tvchannels.  I like a media, which I thinkall like it. That is the modern computer, because without computer you wouldn´tbe successful at this time and for you use it for the school , so you cansearch a word or can make a presentation . All in allI find media is very dangerous for kids, because they can be destroying theirfuture and it is bad for kids health, too. I have many media, but I have planer for this all technology.