Englisch - Korrektur

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Kann jemand dies korrigieren:(Grammatik usw)

Analyse the narrator`s feelings for the young woman he sees on the subway every day:

The narrator`s feelings for the young woman are for example, that she has a "sweet face" (line 5) and "she never wears make-up expect for lipstick" (line5-6) this mean that she look very natural, compare with the spring.


The autor prefers special type of women, because of her ordinary look she is more then the man who looks like everyone
Another feeling aspect ist that he said "Then you must promise to come for dinner on Sunday, and I would promise and then"(l.24+25), from this we can see that she knows what she want and the autor prefers women who get the initiative and show interest.

A other point is the "heart sinks"(Line 28) this discloses that she is a woman who sets off feeling and emotions by men