bitte um hilfe bei englisch referat (korrektur )

hey leutz

wie der Titel schon sagt bitte ich euch um dringende hilfe bei der korrektur eines englisch referates
ich geh momentan in die 13 klasse und muss für englisch noch etwas präsentieren und das auch abgeben ,dabei wird auf alles geachet
(inhalt +grammatik) ich bin wirklich sehr schlecht in englisch und hoffe mit euerer hilfe das ich daraus viele punkte raushollen kann um meine note zu verbessern
Vielen dank im voraus

Bei diesen aufgaben handelt es sich alles um diesen text

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Aufgaben:

1.) What objective facts do youlearn about the author`s life?

The author has become an actor.
She has the acting discovereal in the school itself. He discribe`s that she is the only Mexican were dislikes the mexican food. they love the theather. Becouse of this he lost much of friends. He loves Shakespear and the do any party with the design of Shakespear or he durings car rides or dinner parties.His normal friends don`t exapt that she is adrama queen. Becouse of this hef ound new friends because thayaccept him as it is . The author feel more comfortable in then own skin by the new group.He is a theaher freak whose friends are quiet and non comfortable.They spend her time with girl ``who lunch``.

2.) Outline what she says about her emotinal life!

The author says about her emotinal life that she was very lonley as they say that she is a drama queen .his friends deserted him becouse he is not a normal guy. His friends don`t accept his theatrical tendencies. he loves shakespeare.In the high-school they begon a new life.He found a new group ,they accepted him as it is.he fell more comfortable in her new own skin.But the important thing is that she found herself.

3.)Analyse language and style of the article!

In the text that writen by Jasmin C. ,, A Shakespear-Prep`` is about a guy who find herself and begann a new life.
The author of this use lots of chiasmss ,, i am (line(l) 1.f) and ,,i am (l.2).
In (l.2) they us a similie,an explicitcomparisson between two distinctly different things whichhave at least one feature in common ,, as night and day``. At the next paragraph the use a alliteration,a recurrence of initial sounds.The authors effect of the aliterations to convey auditory images.
At (l 15-27) the author use much of chiasms. The effect of this are that he discribes only one person and that the person stand in the center.

4.)Literature like Shakespeare`s dramas may contributeto your personal development -discuss-!

Shakespeare is one of the first great dramatists.Although his works has survived incomplete, thanks to him some of the big trogedies of histor. he was active in all literary genres. Particulory his romatic tragedies (romeo and julia) and his comedies are very exciting, the story takes places (king lear) givean interesting insight into the living conditions read at the courtin the time of Shakespeare.His really impressed me was how it manuges Shakespeare historical material (the drama king) pocked in great poetry. in i see the first writer who is not satisfied with a decription of the unavoible people but also the examination of the emotinal lives of his characters.
Shakespeare language is strange even for the englisch of his days but then again the most scripts we have today are recreations based on memorys of actors and the audience , but tis fact doesn`t really want to appear as an excuse in my mind it even lets the shakespeare ``fans`` who`re always quoting his crap seem rather ridicoulous becouse they actuelley gabble some words that probably never ever left shakespearmouth
He wasn`t able to write his name properly and left out the second. Theexcuse for his curiosity still be the instability of the englisch language that days but i expect move of a wonnable gennious of language and poesy .