Referat Idiens neue Mittelschicht auf Englisch

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I want to explain you something about Indias new middle class. Please take notes because after my Presentation I ask you some questions.
In the new middle class is a necessary to have a job which is high income, if you want to apply there. The average monthly is around 200euros. Who is significantly higer is considered to be successful and of course they show is gladly. A big car a fancy apartment in the city a new phone and going out for dinner in the best restaurants in the town. The llife from womans are different here. They wear jeans and a T-shirt instead of sari and realitionshi are possible before marriage. The woman are independent and exciting international business life. The enourmous economic upswing in the subcontinent is not without its positive impact on the population and promotes in the different social groups. Meanwhile the net income of households is growing by more than 10 percent
I want to finish my Presentation with a conlusion.
The alleged expansion of the middle class is of great importance. The modernization of highly developed societies such as Western Europe, North America and Japan was based on the two processes of industrialization and urbanization in the latter part of the 19th and early 20th Century. People have been lured by the prospect of manufacturing jobs in the cities - and these jobs should allow them to climb. The emergence of a substantial middle class was an integral part of development, democratization and prosperity of the West. Will repeat this experience in India today?

Let`s look at Mumbai, formerly Bombay. Mumbai is India`s commercial capital, the gateway to the global economy and with nearly 18 million inhabitants, the largest city in the country. Sometimes it is also called the "Golden City", a city to which many arrived penniless and in which they have come to prosperity - in other words, a place with many social opportunities for advancement and the ideal setting for a study of the new middle class of India.

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