korrektur english text

Was mir auffällt sind endlos lange Sätze, die anders aufhören als sie anfangen. Das macht es schwierig deine Gedankengänge nach zu vollziehen. Lieber mehrere kürzere Sätze, als ellenlange verwirrende.


Ich habe das Buch nicht gelesen, deshalb versuche ich deine Sätze zu interpretieren:
I started to read the book “ Q&A” with the feeling that it will not be a good book. At first sight. it looks like a book about quiz shows or crime that do not interest me. (But this book, which acquired the intellectual and more sensitive to my feelings:?)
The way Ram is telling about his hard fate of being a poor orphan living most of his life on the streets and ending up being on a quiz show filled me with sympathy. His way of winning 1 billion dollar is shown us in flashbacks telling us most things about his life. I was quiet surprised after reading the beginning of the plot from which I expected to be full of police and torture . But it came out to be very touching. The protagonist has seen things that no child deserves to see. He has a good heart and is a loyal friend to Salim who he meet at the orphanage. Salim accompanied him during his travel all over India, helped him to survive and to find new friends and enemies whose sad stories touched my heart.
In the end I am very glad to have read the book. I have not only found out about one lonely Indian boy but also about some other people around him that made the book very emotional. If I had not read it, I would totally regret it.