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hey könntet ihr bitte den Text korrigieren Danke:I start to read the book “ Q&A” with the feeling it will not be a good book because I was never interested in quiz shows or crime-books what it look like at first but this book, which acquired the intellectual and more sensitive to my feelings, because the way Ram told about his hard fate to be an orphan living most of his life on the streets being pour and end up being on a quiz show.
He somehow manage to win 1 billion dollar, why he an uneducated boy can do this is shown us in flashbacks so in the end we know most things about his life. I was quiet surprised I like the book after I hate the beginning of the plot because I had think there will be much police and torture but it came out the plot of the book is very touching. The protagonist seen things that no child should have seen yet has a good heart and is a loyal friend to Salim who he meet in his time in an orphanage and with him he travel all over India to survive finding new friends enemies and touch also a lot of life stories that are very sad and get a place in my brain and heart because of the sadness that there story make me feel and the curiosity I would say I am very happy I read the book so I now not only know the story of an only Indian boy but about some people around him which make it a really emotional book for me I would regret it if I had not read it
Frage von zicke616161 (ehem. Mitglied) | am 22.12.2011 - 16:20


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Antwort von FeetFirst (ehem. Mitglied) | 26.12.2011 - 18:22
Was mir auffällt sind endlos lange Sätze, die anders aufhören als sie anfangen. Das macht es schwierig deine Gedankengänge nach zu vollziehen. Lieber mehrere kürzere Sätze, als ellenlange verwirrende.


Ich habe das Buch nicht gelesen, deshalb versuche ich deine Sätze zu interpretieren:
I started to read the book “ Q&A” with the feeling that it will not be a good book. At first sight. it looks like a book about quiz shows or crime that do not interest me. (But this book, which acquired the intellectual and more sensitive to my feelings:?)
The way Ram is telling about his hard fate of being a poor orphan living most of his life on the streets and ending up being on a quiz show filled me with sympathy. His way of winning 1 billion dollar is shown us in flashbacks telling us most things about his life. I was quiet surprised after reading the beginning of the plot from which I expected to be full of police and torture . But it came out to be very touching. The protagonist has seen things that no child deserves to see. He has a good heart and is a loyal friend to Salim who he meet at the orphanage. Salim accompanied him during his travel all over India, helped him to survive and to find new friends and enemies whose sad stories touched my heart.
In the end I am very glad to have read the book. I have not only found out about one lonely Indian boy but also about some other people around him that made the book very emotional. If I had not read it, I would totally regret it.

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