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Why did Brenda kill two people and wounded nine peole at school?


I think Brenda Spancer was alonly girl, because she had not right friends.
And I think shr always under stress an her family was broke up. Her parents knew nothing about their daughter and they did not worry about her.

In my opinion she do not like Monday´s ,because at weekend she always was alone and she had not nobady to tell her problems. Her parents did not have time for her.
And when the week stat with monday , she is bullied again by her classmates, that´s why she do not like Monday´s.
So happened as we could think.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 06.03.2011 - 21:03


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13		 Antwort von Nightfall_sa (ehem. Mitglied) | 06.03.2011 - 21:42
Ich versuch es mal :)

I think Brenda Spancer was a lonely girl, because she had no real friends.
and I think she was always under stress because her parents have split up. Her parents knew nothing about their daughter and they did not worry about her.

I think she does not like Mondays because at the weekend she was always alone and she had no one to talk about her problems. Her parents did not have time for her. And when the week starts again Brenda is bullied by her classmates. So I think because of all these problems she doesen`t like Mondays.

 
 Antwort von GAST | 07.03.2011 - 07:30
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I think Brenda Spancer was a lonely girl, because she had no real friends. and I think she was always under stress because her parents had split up. Her parents knew nothing about their daughter and they did not worry about her.

I think she does not like Mondays because at the weekend she was always alone and she had no one to talk to about her problems. Her parents did not have time for her. And when the week starts again Brenda is bullied by her classmates. So I think because of all these problems she doesen`t like Mondays.

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