Korrektur einer Personbeschreibung aus "a raisin in the sun"

Mama Lena is an older lady of approximate sixty years old. Her body composition is compulentand her hair is grey. Besides she is a mother of two childrens Walter Lee and Beneatha, mother in law of Ruth and grandmother of Travis. Another significant point is that Mama Lena is a black widow.


It is important to mention that she has a precarious financial situation however she thinks money is not all in her life.Money is only a means to an end for Mama; dreams are more important to her than material wealth, and her dream is to own a house with a garden and yard .Her dream is from a ideal family and the solidary in her family. In addition mama lena is very religous.
Look at her behaviour . Her behaviour is characterized by her affection.
Everytime she is there for everyone even so she thinks about her weal and her necessities.
Esspecially she tries to deal justly always so that everyone behaves respectfully.
It is importan for her that each go a good way in her familiy.because Lena is the strength and soul of the family who must hold them together when it seems they are falling apart.
Another point is it that mama lena is an emotional person.in spite of she doesnŽt show her feelings everytime because at first mama thinks about the others in her family.
But even if there is a emotional release she tries to check her feelings.
I would like to add that among each other the relationship is different.
The Relationship between Mama Lena and Beneatha is problematical the reason is Mama rejects Beneatha’s seemingly un-Christian sentiments about God. Nocht nicht ganz fertig.