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Korrektur Englisch (E-Mail an Lehrerin)

Frage: Korrektur Englisch (E-Mail an Lehrerin)
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Heyyy ihr Lieben. Kann einer mal bitte schnell über die Zeichensetzung schauen? Das kann ich absolut nicht, daher wäre es super wenn ihr mir die Kommas an die richtigen Stellen setzen könntet.

Zeichensetzung in Englisch ist nicht so mein Ding.
Falls ihr andere FEhler entdeckt, wäre es super wenn ihr diese auch korrigiert aber der Schwerpunkt sollte die Zeichensetzung sein. Die ist mir sehr wichtig bzw. meiner Lehrerin sehhhr wichtig.
VIEEELEN DANK SCHONMAL :)


Dear Mrs.....
I have a big problem concerning our in-class essay at Monday because my second qualifying test for the Lufthansa is at Monday too. I am waiting 8 months for this appointment so it is very important for me. It is a test for becoming a pilot and it is called “Firmenqualifikation”.
I have already passed the first qualifying test (Berufsgrunduntersuchung).
I have learned nearly 7 months to pass this second qualifying test because everyone has only one chance so it is not possible to resit the qualifying test.
The test is on the 7th and 8th February. I am sorry for telling you this now but I thought the appointment is next month. What should I do right now? Can you give me other options?
I feel pressurized because I don’t really know what to do. If I postpone/cancel my appointment, I will have to wait definitely another 8 months. The other problem is that I have other exams in the following week. I am studying English, French and Sports so you can imagine that there a lot of exams during the next two weeks.
Do I have another option instead of writing the in-class essay? Maybe a term paper, assignment or an essay with a difficult theme? If you give me the instruction today I will do the assignment over the week-end.

If you make an exception and admit my request, I will give you the letter from the Lufthansa with the invitation and I will tell them to give me a further attestation after the test.

I hope that you can help me; otherwise I will cancel my qualifying test.
Frage von Diablos (ehem. Mitglied) | am 04.02.2011 - 10:51


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14		 Antwort von yogi123 (ehem. Mitglied) | 04.02.2011 - 11:34
I
have been waiting 8 months


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13		 Antwort von Grizabella | 04.02.2011 - 12:36
Dear Mrs.....
I have a big problem concerning our in-class essay at Monday, because my second qualifying test for the Lufthansa is at Monday, too. I have been waiting for 8 months for this appointment, so it is very important for me. It is a test for becoming a pilot and it is called “Firmenqualifikation”.
I have already passed the first qualifying test (Berufsgrunduntersuchung).
I have learned nearly 7 months to pass this second qualifying test, because everyone has only one chance, so it is not possible to resit the qualifying test.
The test is on the 7th and 8th February. I am sorry for telling you this now, but I thought the appointment will be next month. What should I do right now? Can you give me other options?
I feel pressurized, because I don’t really know what to do. If I postpone/cancel my appointment, I will have to wait definitely another 8 months. The other problem is that I have other exams in the following week. I am studying English, French and Sports so you can imagine that there a lot of exams during the next two weeks.
Do I have another option instead of writing the in-class essay? Maybe a term paper, assignment or an essay with a difficult theme? If you give me the instruction today I will do the assignment over the week-end.

If you make an exception and admit my request, I will give you the letter from the Lufthansa with the invitation and I will tell them to give me a further attestation after the test.

I hope that you can help me; otherwise I will cancel my qualifying test.


Ich hab jetzt ein paar Kommas eingesetzt und zweimal eine Zeit geändert. Sonst hab ich aber nichts korrigiert/angeschaut.

 
 Antwort von GAST | 04.02.2011 - 19:09
Zitat:
I have a big problem concerning our in-class essay on Monday, because my second qualifying test for[---] Lufthansa will be on Monday, too. I have been waiting for this appointment
for eight months [---] This test,called “Firmenqualifikation” is very important for becoming a pilot.
I have already passed the first qualifying test (Berufsgrunduntersuchung).
I have learned for nearly seven months to pass this second qualifying test, because everyone has only got one chance: it is not possible to resit the qualifying test.
The test is on February 7th and 8th . I am sorry for telling you this now, but I have thought the appointment would be next month. What am I going to do right now? Could you give me other options?
I feel pressurized, because I don’t really know what to do. If I [---]cancel my appointment, I will definitely have to wait [---] for another eight months. The other problem is that I `ll have other exams [---] the following week. I am studying English, French and Sports so you can imagine that there are a lot of exams during the next two weeks.
Do I have another option instead of writing the in-class essay? Maybe a term paper, an assignment or an essay with a difficult theme? If you gave me the instruction today I would do the assignment this the week-end.

If you made an exception and admitted my request, I would give you the letter [---] with the invitation from [---] Lufthansa and I would tell them to give me a further attestation after the test.

I hope [---] you can help me; else I will have to cancel my qualifying test.


mein Lieber, dafür dass du Englisch studierst ... na, ja.

Ich bin von Grizabellas "Korrektur"-Versuch ausgegangen


fett= korrigiert/eingefügt; [---] = gestrichen

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