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Hallo. Ich bitte Euch, den folgenden Brief zu korrigieren. Es geht um Dead Poets Society- Club der toten Dichter


Thank you for your letter. You are right, we had a verly long time no contact. Momentary I have winter holidays, we have a lot of snow in silver stone (Erzgebirge). There are a lot of time for visiting friends, watching films and reading books. At this moment, I read a exciting book: Dead Poets Society. I want you to tell some facts. The novel is based on the film by Tom Schulmann and written by N. H. Kleinbaum. It’s about a school only for boys in Vermont in 1959. It’s a elite school for rich sons of academics. They have a good organized school day, without any freetime. They didn’t go after school at home, they life at the campus. In the new schoolyear in 1959, they becomes a new English teacher, his name is John Keating. He impress his pupil with peculiar instruction methods (Unterrichtsmethoden) . His motto is “Carpe diem” or “seize the day”. He moves his boys to do some specially activities in their life. A bit later. The pupil find out, that there was a club 20 years ago, in which Keating was a candidat: Dead Poets Society. The aim of the club is to take emotions free way (Gefühlen seinen freien Lauf lassen), without any expectations. The teenager are interested in the club and let them live on. They frequently meet in a hidden cave outside the campus and revel in the recital of all kinds of poetry. Under the influence of their beloved teacher Keating, the boys start learning to be true to themselves and everything seems to be turning out fine. The club has seven candidates, they are only members, when they died (Sie sind erst richtige Mitglieder, wenn sie tot sind) .
Then a tragedy happens…. Neil Perry, a candidat of the club want to be an actor. The Dead Poets Society and Keating give courage, he want to turn his dream in reality. He chose a role as the Puck in A Midsummer Night’s Dream. His parents don’t know, what he had done. They are against playing theater. When Neils father notice that, he freaked out ( Als Neils Vater davon erfährt, flippte er aus). After the performance, his father bring Neil at home. He tells Neil, that he will go to a military school. Neil can not comprehend his fate and commit suicide. Because his instruction methods (Unterrichtsmethoden), the teacher and parents put the blame on Keating. He has to go and left school. At the end, when the pupil see the teacher for the last one (das letzte Mal), they stand up on their desks as the last tribute to the former English teacher.
Perhaps you watching the film, I recommend it. Have a good slight in the year 2011!
Frage von lieschene (ehem. Mitglied) | am 14.12.2010 - 19:56


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Antwort von MsPineappleLumps (ehem. Mitglied) | 14.12.2010 - 20:24
Du musst echt drauf achten, dass du bei der dritten Person Singular das "s" dran hängst!
He, she, it das "s" muss mit ;)

Thank you for your letter.
You are right, we did not have any contact for a long time. I have got winter holidays right now and we have lots of snow in silver stone (Erzgebirge). I have got a lot of time for visiting friends, watching films and reading books. At this moment, I`m reading an exciting book: Dead Poets Society. I want to tell you some facts about it. The novel is based on the film by Tom Schulmann and written by N. H. Kleinbaum. It’s about a school only for boys in Vermont in 1959. It’s an elite school for rich sons of academics. They have a good organized school day, without any freetime. They don`t go home after school because they life at the campus. In the new schoolyear in 1959, they get a new English teacher, his name is John Keating. He impresses his pupils with peculiar instruction methods (Unterrichtsmethoden) . His motto is “Carpe diem” or “seize the day”. He encourages his boys to do some special activities in their life. After a short time the pupils find out, that Keating was a candidat in a club 20 years ago: Dead Poets Society. The aim of the club is to give vent to one`s feelings (Gefühlen seinen freien Lauf lassen), without any expectations. The teenagers are interested in the club and restart it again. They frequently meet in a hidden cave outside the campus and revel in the recital of all kinds of poetry. Under the influence of their beloved teacher Keating, the boys start to learn to be true to themselves and everything seems to be turning out fine. The club has seven candidates, they are only then members of it after they died. (Sie sind erst richtige Mitglieder, wenn sie tot sind) .
Then a tragedy happens…. Neil Perry, a candidat of the club wants to be an actor. The Dead Poets Society and Keating encourage him, he wants realize his dreams. He chooses a role as Puck in „A Midsummer Night’s Dream“. His parents don’t know, what he had done. They are against doing drama. After noticing that Neil`s father freaks out ( Als Neils Vater davon erfährt, flippte er aus). After the performance, his father brings Neil home. He tells Neil, that he has to go to a military school. Neil can not understand his fate and commits suicide. Because of his instruction methods (Unterrichtsmethoden), the teacher and parents put the blame on Keating. He has to go and leave school. At the end, when the pupils see the teacher for the last time (das letzte Mal), they stand up on their desks as the last tribute to the former English teacher.
Perhaps you want to watch the film, I recommend it. And happy New Year!

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