Kinderarbeit-korretkur

ich musste meine meinung begründen, warum ich mich für das tham kinderarbeit entschieden habe.
ist das so in ordnung?


I chose the topic of child labor in India; I find it very interesting in what kind of problems the children live.
Furthermore, I am interested in general for children in poor countries. I don´t think it is fair that children must work in a young age. They are forced to work. All children have a right of childhood.
What I mean by the childhood that every child has a right to go to school. In addition, each child should have fun in his life; they should have known the way to meet new people. On the one hand, the children are treated in a terrible way; on the other hand, it is in some countries, where children work for poor families, important as they are confronted daily with death, and this is among other things, the only solution to survive.