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Hallo !
Muss am Montag einen Aufatz über China vs.
Deutschland im Hinblick auf die Wirtschaft abgeben. Da ich ziemlich schwach im schriftlichen bin und mich nicht vollkommen blamieren möchte, hoffe ich, dass mich hier jemand korrigieren kann :)

Since Chinas opening-up policy 1978 and the establishment of " Sonderwirtchaftszonen", foreign companies settled near the coast to produce and to invest, which supported the economic growth of 9 % per year, so that the EU / China trade becomes thirty times greater than before.
The cooperation with Chinese companies, the foreign partners were forced to, leads soon to an independent Production, because of the improved modern techniques. In addition to that, the Government supported the education of the student with *Auslandsstipendien* to promote qualified workers and guarantee an finacial safe future.
In comparism with German education system nowadays, qualified worker will be already missing in the net five years.
China is now the third largest economy and third largest trading nation in the world. Although the foreign trade of China lost power because of the global economic crisis, experts claim that it will be a question of thme that China become export champion and displace Usa and Japan from the top. Of course it isn`t really surprising that the economic performance of a country with an unofficial number of 1,6 billion people, overtake a population with approximately 82 million. Even through Germany isn`t on the 3rd place of the export ranking anymore, the Chinese strength delivers benefits for German economy, because the peoples republic develops a great *Absatzmarkt* for German production. Although FRance is the most important Absatzmarkt, german companies exported 2009 products off 66 billion euro to china.
To conclude, in contrast to other developing countries, China has succeeded in its economic development not to submit to the Western investors, but to use the knowledge and the capital of investors to the benefit of China. This fact is probably one of the secrets of the surprising and rapid economic success of the People`s Republic China.
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Antwort von Timea | 23.10.2010 - 13:58
Since China’s opening-up policy 1978 and the establishment of " Sonderwirtschaftszonen", foreign companies settled near the coast to produce[produce what? – wenn du nur “produzieren” an sich nehmen willst, würde ich “manufacture” eher verwenden] and to invest, which supported the economic growth BY 9 % per year, so that the EU / China trade BECAME thirty times greater than before.
The cooperation with Chinese companies, WHICH the foreign partners were forced to, soon LEAD to an independent production, because of the improvement in modern TECHNOLOGY .
In addition to that, the government supported the education of students by paying scholarships for foreigners to promote qualified workers and guarantee a financially safe future.
In comparison to the German education system nowadays, qualified workers will already be missing in the next five years.
China is now the third largest economy and third largest trading nation in the world. Although the foreign trade of China lost EFFICIENCY oder has earned less (eher als power – power ist eher Macht – der Handel hat ja keine Macht, sondern Effektivität oder Nutzen) because of the global economic crisis, experts claim that it will be a question of time FOR China TO become an export champion and displace the USA and Japan from the top. Of course it isn’t really surprising that the economic performance of a country with an unofficial number of 1,6 billion people, overtake a population with approximately 82 million. Even through Germany isn`t on the 3rd place of the export ranking anymore, the Chinese strength delivers benefits for the German economy, because the People`s Republic (als politisches Fachwort für Volksrepublik, wenn du das meintest ;) )develops a great outlet market for German PRODUCTS. Although Ffance is the most important outlet market, German companies exported 2009 products WORTH 66 billion Euros to China.
To conclude, in contrast to other developing countries, China has succeeded in its economic development not to submit to the Western investors, but to use the knowledge and the capital of investors to the benefit of China. This fact is probably one of the secrets of the surprising and rapid economic success of the People`s Republic China.

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