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In the chapter License to kill Thomas Ram has a reunion with Salim after five years.
At the beginning of the chapter Salim tells Ram that his aim is being an actor so he does acting classes which are paid by Abbas Rizvi a famous film producer.
After that Salim tells Ram the whole story from the beginning. He tells Ram that one day on his job as a delivery boy he goes to a family where are a lot of pictures of a man who is called Mr.Rawal. He refers him to Mr. Pappu. Salim is told that he needs photos. So he buys a camera and takes some pictures. On the way he was attacked by a man and so he jumped into a bus. Shortly after he gets into the bus some hindus ruffians who are heavily armed want to kill all Muslims. While this offense a man takes out his gun and menaces the men. Quickly they leave the bus and after that action the man whose name is Ahmed Khan introduces himself to Salim and asks him for helping him for the housework. Salim agrees. After a few days Mr. Khan gets a lot of envelops which Salim isn’t allowed to open but he does. Inside that he sees photos of men and their addresses. On the evening Salim watches a Crime News Show, where these men are shown and they got killed by Ahmed. One time he gets a packet with a picture of Abbas Rizvi. So Salim changes the picture and address, and Khan kills the wrong guy. At the end Khan is killed by the police.


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