Englisch- Korrektur

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Darauf kann ich dir eine ganz kurze und prägnante Antwort geben: "Nein, absolut nicht, unkorrigierbar."

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The war of independence (1)
The war of independence is an act of rebellion caused war, which ends with the 13 British colonies declaring their independence from Britain.

The civil war
This war between the northern states and the the states in the south was caused by the deep economic, social and political division between the states, which came mainly in the slavery issue to light. (2)

Immigration and Industrialisation (3)
The industrialisation is operated by the west with its huge natural ressources of oil and timber, many immigrants from Europe and the construction of the railway.

The First World War
America`s entry into the First World War, in cooperation with Britain and France led to the defeat of Germany, Austria and Italy.

The great depression and the new deal (4)

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During severe economic crisis of the 1930s Franklin D. Roosevelt was elected to the President on at platform of social reform and industrial recovery called the New Deal and in this way the federal governement spent a lot of money on infrastructure.


The second world war
The allies (indcluding The USA) and the axis powers (Germany, Japan, etc) declared the war on each other after attacking its navel base at Pearl Harbor in Hawaii by Germany`s alliance partner Japan.

The cold war
The cold war is a conflict between the U.S. and the Soviet Union, which ends in victory for the Americans and the collapse of the Soviet Union in 1989.

Social reform
The social reform includes the prohibition of racial segregation and welfare programs and although they have made great progress, the problem continues to lie in this area

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The War of Independence was a conflict initiated by the British King as the answer to [----] the 13 British colonies` declaring their independence from Britain.

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The Civil War between the Northern [---] and the [---] Southern States [---] resulted from [---] a deep economic, social and political division between the states, [---] with the issue of slavery as its ostensible cause.

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The industrialisation is operated by the opening up and settlement of the west with its ressources of oil and timber, many immigrants from Europe and the construction of the railway.