Bitte Nachkorrektur, englisch
Frage: Bitte Nachkorrektur, englisch(5 Antworten)
Vielen Dank im Voraus It was a really interesting race of Word Cup super –combined event in Wengen on January 15, 2010. Many good sky racers took part. Bode Miller had the third best run in the slalom for a total time of 2.44.92, beating Ivica Kortelic of Crotia by 33 seconds, more than enough. Ivica Kortelic got the silver medal. The third racer was Svidal Akse from Norway in Round one, Downhill, he had a really good time 1.53.15, the best time. He didn’t win the race because he was disqulified and this race was finished for him. Zubringer Silven from SWL received unfortunatly the bronze medal. In the first round, downhill, he was pretty good. He had the best time 1.53.88. His results from that round are better than Bode Millers. However his second round, Slalom was unambiguously worse, his pleassure was not anymore on his side. The time from Slalom was 2.45.32. Body Miller was really happy about his order he said: “The way I executed; the way I skied, is something I’ll be proud for the rest of my life.” Now he has three medals already in Vancouver. Body Miller is America’s greatest skier, ever. |
| ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 28.02.2010 - 13:53 |
| Antwort von GAST | 28.02.2010 - 14:17 |
Zuerst würde ich mal versuchen die Namen richtig zu schreiben... Silvan Zurbriggen Aksel Svindal den Rest schaue ich mir an wenn ich Zeit habe... Woody |
| Antwort von GAST | 28.02.2010 - 14:57 |
"He didn’t win the race because he was disqulified" - Nach "race" ein Komma. "pleassure" nur mit einem -s- also: "pleasure" "Body Miller was really happy about his order he said:" - nach "order" ein Komma. Das ist mir jetzt so aufgefallen x) |
| Antwort von ANONYM | 28.02.2010 - 14:58 |
Bode Miller won World Cup super-combined race at Wengen on January 15, 2010. Many good ski racers took par to this race. But the only winner is Body Miller. He is an American alpine ski racer and an Olympic and World Championship gold medallist. Bode Miller had the third best run in the slalom for a total time of 2.44.92, beating Ivica Kostelic of Croatia by 33 seconds, more than enough. Ivica Kortelic got the silver medal. The third racer was Aksel Svindal from Norway. He had a really good time for his first downhill: 1.53.15, which was the best time. He didn’t win the race because he was disqualified and that’s why it was finished for him. Silvan Zurrbrigen from SWL received unfortunately the bronze medal. In the first round downhill, he was pretty good. He had the second best time 1.53.88. His results from that round are better than the ones of Bode Millers. However his second round, slalom was unambiguously worse, his pleasure was not anymore on his side. The time from slalom was 2.45.32. Body Miller was really happy about his order he said: “The way I executed; the way I skied, is something I’ll be proud for the rest of my life.”Now he has three medals already in Vancouver”. Body Miller is America’s greatest skier ever. |
| Antwort von GAST | 28.02.2010 - 15:03 |
The World Cup super-combined race in Wengen on January 15, 2010. Many of the worlds top skiers took part, but the race was won by Bode Miller. He is an american Alpine ski racer and an Olympic and World Championship gold medalist. Bode Miller had the third best run in the slalom for a total time of 2.44.92, beating Ivica Kostelic of Crotia by a total margin of 33 seconds. Ivica Kostelic won the silver medal. Fortunately for Bode Miller Norways Aksel Svindal, who had finished the downhill race in 1.53.15, the best time of the day was disqualified. Silvan Zurbriggen from Switzerland received the bronze medal, largely thanks to his good finishing time in the first round, the downhill race. He finished with the best time of 1.53.88, beating Bode Miller`s. However in the second round, the slalom race he finished significantly worse, taking 2.45.32 to finish the course. Bode Miller was really happy about the outcome of the race and said: “The way I executed (was willst du damit sagen?); the way I skied is something I’ll be proud of for the rest of my life.” Miller has already won three medals in Vancouver. Bode Miller is already largely recognised as the greatest skier in the history of the United States. Irgendwie ist dein Text ziemlich zusammenhanglos dahergeschrieben, erst geht es um ein Rennen in Wengen (in der Schweiz) bei dessen Beschreibung es nicht ganz deutlich ist, wer genau nun welche Medaille gewonnen hat und dann geht`s am Ende urplötzlich um die Winterspiele in Vancouver. Was du mit Word Cup super-combined event meinst weiß ich auch nicht so ganz genau, kenne mich aber mit ski-fahren auch nicht aus, kann ich also nichts zu sagen. Solang es nur ne hausaufgabe ist... |
| Antwort von GAST | 28.02.2010 - 15:05 |
Many of the worlds top skiers took part in the World Cup super-combined race in Wengen on January 15, 2010, but the race was won by Bode Miller. He is an american Alpine ski racer and an Olympic and World Championship gold medalist. hab selber nen fehler eingebaut, so ist es besser. |