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* bought him

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- Vermutlich alles in Vergangenheit

selber gestrickter Schal vom girl friend
Bleigiessen
Feuerwerk abfeuern
mit allen anstossen mit Champagner
einen Schneemann und eine Schneefrau bauen
eine Schneeballschlacht machen
Schlittenfahren gehen

den Anfang kann man stehen lassen, wenn du die richtige Zeitform nimmst
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Paul is 18 years old and his nicest x-mas present was a laptop which his mum have bought him.On new years eve he was with friends and play a lot of games with his new playstation at home. His friends envy (beneiden ?) him, because he gets many expensiv things from his parents and they thing , that Paul is spoilt(verwöhnt?, but they like him. Paul have play with his friends in the snow and they have do/make? a snowball fight. But that was not all because the friends and Paul have did (done ..kp..:D ) a great firework and made a snowman and a snowwoman and they have make a race with a sleigh (schlitten).

Emely is 17 years old and is from a single family, so she lives only with his mum. Emely dont get x-mas presents because the mum save/spare money to buy a house , because the flag/apartment is to old.
But Emely bought her mother a present in fact ( und zwar) a pullover with a big heart ahead (vorne). On new years eve her grandma was at her home and they have celebrate it in a threesome (zu dritt).
Emely dont like the snow and dont play with it in her freetime because for Emely the snow is to cold and she hates coldness.

Macht man bei get ein s dran?xD
Emely dont gets ? oder Emely dont get ?

Paul is 18 years old and his nicest x-mas present was a laptop which his mum has bought him. On new years eve he was with friends and played a lot of games with his new playstation at home. His friends envy him, because he got many expensive things from his parents and they think, that Paul is spoilt, but they still like him. Paul played with his friends in the snow and they did a snowball fight. And on top of that Paul and his friends made a great firework and built a snowman as well as a snowwoman and they did a race with their[b] sleigh[b]s

Mir scheint, du hast einige Probleme mit den Zeiten. Du musst darauf achten: wenn du etwas beschreibst, dass sowohl in der Vergangenheit angefangen hat als auch beendet wurde, nimmst du einfach immer Simple Past. Wenn es sich um etwas handelt, was in der Vergangenheit begonnen wurde, aber noch andauert, dann nimmst du Present Perfect.

Paul is 18 years old and his nicest x-mas present was a laptop which his mum has bought him. On New Year`s Eve he was at home with his friends and they played a lot of games with his new playstation. His friends envied him, because he got many expensive things from his parents and so they think that Paul is spoiled, but they still like him. Paul played with his friends in the snow and they had a snowball fight. But that was not all - Paul and his friends made a great firework and built a snowman and a snowwoman and they also made a sleigh race.

Emely (ich wär für Emily aber egal :D) is 17 years old and lives in a single household only with her mum. Although Emely didn`t get any x-mas presents because her mum wants to save money to buy a house, because the flat is too old, she bought a pullover with a big heart on it as a present for her mother . On New Year`s Eve her grandma invited them to celebrate with her in a threesome. (das klingt so nach "Flotter Dreier" xD)
Emely doesn`t like snow and so she doesn`t play in it in her freetime because for her the snow is too cold and she hates coldness.

Verdammt, da warn andere schneller :D

Zitat:
Mir scheint, du hast einige Probleme mit den Zeiten.

Ohhh jaa.. :) Aber vielen Dank fürs korrigieren.

Dir auch vielen Dank algieba

Zitat:
her in a threesome. (das klingt so nach "Flotter Dreier" xD)

:P daher kenn ich dieses wort HAHA :D!