Bitte um Korrektur

Ich sollte eine Charakterisierung über Clarisse Mc. aus dem Buch Fahrenheit 451 schreiben. Bitte mal die Rechtschreibung und Grammatik korrigieren. Für Vorschläge zu einer besseren Ausdrucksweise bin ich auch dankbar =)

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Clarisse McClellan is a seventeen-year-old girl and she is a neighbor of Montag.
She is a kind of crazy and an outsider from society because people think that she is antisocial but she always says she is not.
Furthermore she has extraordinary affectations for her age. Clarisse loves to walks in the rain, playing with flowers especially with dandelions, hiking, autumn leaves and sessions by her psychiatrist.
She never asks “why” something is so or so, she would always to know “how”. The question “why” is what she disliked by teachers as well. It is a reason for leave school.
Clarisse lives with her mother, father, and her uncle.
When she meets Montag she accepts him for what he is but she changes his life in the one or other way, because of her questions. She gets him to think about many important things, he noticed that she is right and that there is no love, no contempt and no pleasure in his life.
All in all she is a free-minded individual and happy with herself. She is still intelligent and impulsive as well.
Furthermore she is a kind of sympatric and a beautiful young woman.
The end of her life is an accident by car.