Korrektur Englisch Hausaufgabe

Hallo,
würde mich über eine Korrektur der Englisch Hausaufgabe sehr freuen.
Wir mussten einen Tagebucheintrag verfassen. Ob das alles so verlaufen ist, ne... aber egal
Schon mal Danke!

4th of December, 2009
Dear Diary,

Today was one of the days nothing happened the way it should.

I was in school and had just 4 lessons. But in the subject business administration I wasn’t very lucky. There we always dice the person who will be asked several questions to get a mark. And every pupil has his own number. My number is 2. And it was bound to happen: This day was my turn. I wasn’t very glad about this, because today we once had to calculate. Oh my god, how wonderful. I was questioned about the different forms of recapitalization in a corporation and had to do al lot of number work. So I got just 10 points, but it’s still ok.

Homeward bound with the bus I thought I had to die of hunger. I was so extremely hungry that I was so happy to ring the bell at home. My pleasure was fast damped down. Pancake for lunch. I think other people would jump for joy if they here just the word pancake. Far from it! Pancake is the only food I really don’t like. So I had to make a frozen pizza.

In the afternoon I was by my horse G***** in the riding stable. Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday I had so much to do for school that I had no time to go riding. So he was offended. And when my horse is offended, I don’t have a chance to catch him on his meadow. That sounds perhaps funny but he is a horse with an extraordinary character. I just cleaned his stable and drove home with my scooter. I was so cold that the drive home seemed it will never end.

Can this day become even better?

Cinema with my friends in the evening. This was the last chance to save the day. It’s not difficult to guess which movie we watched. NEW MOON.
I had high expectations on this movie because TWILIGHT was such a great movie. I was disappointed after NEW MOON. In my opinion the movie was in some parts too long drawn-out and not pretty exciting. What a pity!

To answer the question if this day can become better: NO!

Short before the witching hour I arrived at home and I was happy to go to bed.
New day – new chance.


Goodnight!


5th of December, 2009

Dear Diary,

Today I could sleep late. After a stressful week this is the best to regain one’s strength. I therefore woke up about noon. So I could start well-rested and full of n energy in the new day.

My mum wasn’t at home thus I had to cook for my brothers and my sister. I really like cooking because then I’m able to chose the recipe for lunch. And that means certainly no pancakes! But on the other hand that means I’m spoilt for choice. I’ve chosen spaghetti, which is easy to cook and very popular by my siblings.

Then I had to hurry up to be punctual in the riding stable. Every Saturday we jump with our horses. I always look forward to this, because it’s absolutely fun.
But this time my horse G**** bucked and started running like a bee had pricked him. I wasn’t able to stay any longer in the saddle and fell on the ground.
Thankfully I didn’t hurt myself and at the end of the jumping lesson G***** was very good. So he got some carrots and apples as gratification.

Again arriving at home I had to help my mother to prepare food for the evening. This day Santa Claus will come to my little sister and brother and we invited our family for dinner. There was quite a lot to do but we managed everything pretty good. I really like to see my family and we had a lot of fun.

In the evening I fell into bed with a tired but contented feeling. Hope tomorrow will be good, too. I will have a lot to do for school. I will see.




Goodnight!