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Hallo,
könnt ihr bitte meinen Text durchlesen und mich auf rechtschreibt- bzw.
Grammatikfehler hinweisen. Ich muss das Thema morgen abgeben. Es eilt also!
Vielen Dank

MY OWN WORK
Choosing a subject:
I chose the sub-heading “Greenpeace” because I think that it is really drastically how the industrialized countries and the humans play with the environment.
The climatic change is acute. If it goes on like this without changing anything, I will be really worried about our children, because we are responsible for our next generations. For this reason it´s really important, that such groups like Greenpeace take action to open the eyes of the humans. They must think to the environmental protection and must take care for nature. Everyone has to manner according to our nature.
I chose the subject English because I really like speaking that language. I also want to learn that kind of language further on.

Process of our work
At the beginning of our Project XXX, YYY and I built a group. Before we had chosen our topic we thought whether we can find enough information for that topic. After having decided our topic we met for sharing the sub-headings, which must be given off till our Pfingstferien.
During and after those vacations we often met for working together on our topic. By the counseling interviews with our teachers we told them our topics and asked them our questions. That was really helpful, because they gave further tips and suggestions for improvement to us.

My own work
First I searched for information in the library in GÖL and the internet. Furthermore I found some prospects and flyers in the Greenpeace regional office in Mannheim. Then I had to sorting and working through all these information. After having had an overlook I began with my documentation.

Reflection
Our teamwork in the group was really positive. First we discussed a little bit about our topic. But in the end everyone agreed. The split-up of our sub-headings right chummy. We were greatly collegial and helpful among each other and rent informative material to other members as well.
I think that the topic “Der Umgang mit unserer Erde und die Folgen” is really important. It should be a must in each school because the young generation has the responsibility for the future.
Frage von Acco | am 18.06.2009 - 12:15

 
Antwort von GAST | 18.06.2009 - 12:28
erstmal grossen kompliment deiner einstellung wegen, ich fuehle mich bestaerkt ;)


der climatic change ist soweit ich weiss der climate change, wenn du das anders gelernt hast, vllt kann man auch climatic change sagen.

anstatt humans wuerde ich human beings sagen,

they have to become conscious (sich bewusst werden ueber) about environmental protection and to take care of (our) nature

speaking this language,

Iam going to learn it further on/ I`d like to learn it further on... ?


Ich denke, du hast das sehr gut gemacht, auch wenn du es so laesst. wofuer ist das denn?

lg.

p.s. falls du an greenpeace interessiert bist, schreib mir ne message


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Antwort von algieba (ehem. Mitglied) | 18.06.2009 - 14:14
MY OWN WORK
Choosing a subject:
I chose the sub-heading “Greenpeace” because I think that the industrialized countries and the humans play with the environment drastically.
The climate change is acute. If it goes on like this without changing anything, I will be really worried about our children, because we are responsible for our next generations. For this reason it´s really important, that such groups like Greenpeace take action to open the eyes of the human beings. They must think about environmental protection and must take care for nature. Everyone has to mind our nature.
I chose the subject English because I really like speaking that language and want to continue learning it. (that kind of language --> diese Art von Sprache --> du magst germanische Sprachen...?)

Process of our work
At the beginning of our project XXX, YYY and I built a group. Before we had chosen our topic we thought about whether we can find enough information for it. After having decided for our topic we met for sharing the sub-headings, which must be given off till our Whitsun holidays.
During and after those holidays we often met for working on our topic together. At the counseling interviews with our teachers we told them our topics and asked them our questions. That was really helpful, because they gave further tips and suggestions for improvement.

My own work
First I searched for information in the library in GÖL and on the internet. Furthermore I found some prospects and flyers in the Greenpeace regional office in Mannheim. Then I had to sort and workc through all these information. After having had an overlook I began with my documentation.

Reflection
Our teamwork in the group was really positive. First we discussed a little bit about our topic. But in the end everyone agreed. The distribution of our sub-headings was right chummy. We were greatly collegial and helpful to each other and lent (rent--> heißt vermieten, das habt ihr ja sicher nicht gemacht) informative material to other members as well.
I think that the topic “Der Umgang mit unserer Erde und die Folgen” is really important. It should be a must in each school because the young generation has the responsibility for the future.


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Antwort von Andrea1995 | 18.06.2009 - 14:30
einfach deutschen text hier eingeben : http://www.translate.google.de/translate_t#

und auf englisch übersetzen :) dann noch den satzbau ein bisschen zurecht "stuzen"

lg

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