Korrektur....bitte^^

Musss morgen meine English-Hausarbeit abgeben :))
Und wollt euch mal fragen, ob ihr so nett seid und diesen text korrigieren könnt ^^ wäre nett

The short story “The Dragon” is written by Cynthia Forder.
It deals with two teenagers, a girl calles Kay and a boy calles Bob. Bob feels in love and wants a relationship with Kay.
At the beginning of the story Kay and Bob are sitting on a swing and looking to the oil refineries which are sometimes breathe fire. That moments let imagine Kay, that are dragons inside and that is the reason for the name of the story. Caused on the friend relationship of their mothers, Bob cames always with his mother to visit Kay.
Bob is tyring to have a date with Kay but Kay is don’t intressted in him and thinks that he is stupid. In the middle of the story Bob sad the truth because he find out that she thinks bad about him. He tell her, that he is sitting with her just because of their mothers and afterwards he drive away. Kay feels guitly and cries . At the end Kay’s mother ask for Bob an Kay lies to her mother that Bob went to write some poetry. She goes into her room an watches the “dragons”.


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