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hi wäre nett wenn sich das mal jemand anschauen könnte nach fehlern
oder vlt noch wüsste was man schreiben könnte danke

wir sollten einen brief an jemanden schreiben der einen text verfasst hat

Meat:Making Global Warming Worse

Dear Mr Wash, in your article "Meat:Making Global Warming Worse", you write about a big problem of western countries.
The people eats to much meat, they not only eat good meat, they eat mass meat. It´s not only an climating problem, it´s an health problem too. You´re right when you say that the big bosses, the biggest environmental siners, have to change the economical way of their firms. They have to deal with environmental to make it better.
But I would say, everyone can change it. Noone have to say that not his problem, everyone can do a little thing. Many little things could be a big thing. When the people go a better way and have a better understanding for the environmental. The big bosses have to change, because noone would giving their money to those, who kick the enviromental with foods.