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Reported Speech heißt: Einleitungsteil (she said that... he told me that...) plus "Rest" um eine "Zeit" nach hinten versetzt.

Last week Tina told me (ÜBRIGENS KEIN KOMMA BEI SOLCHEN EINLEITUNGSSÄTZEN) she was a secretary KEIN THEN, and THAT she likeD this job, ALthough it WAS a little boring from time to time. SHE WAS NOT ABLE TO complain, because SHE had always wanted to do this SORT of WORK.

SHE ALSO TOLD ME THAT SHE HAD STILL BEEN AT SCHOOL TWO MONTHS BEFORE. SHE SAID THAT She WAS lucky She WAS employed. SHE SAID THAT it was hard to find a job thOse days. TINA SAID HER friend Betty HAD BEEN unemployed for six months, so she dID not haVE enough money to pay the bills. BETTY`S father was angry with her. TINA SAID THAT he thOUGHT HIS DAUGHTER was lazy and must try harder to find a job. TINS SAID THAT SHE KNOWS that Betty was not lazy at all, but THAT SHE DID not want to take just any job. THE WEEK BEFORE someone offered BETTY a post at a restaurant. TINA SAID BETTY did not start because she THOUGHT she HAD not BEEN to school to clean dishes at a restaurant. TINA TOLD ME THAT it WAS really hard for BETTY. TINA SAID THAT BETTY felt useless and THAT she was afraid of losing her friends. TINA TOLD ME THAT even BETTY`S boyfriend felt that things haD changed. He just wantED to enjoy himself, but it seemED to be immpossible THEN. TINA SAID THAT SHE hopeS Betty WOULD finally manage all thOse problems.

Ich hoffe, dass ich nichts übersehen habe - ich musste mir den Originaltext zwischendurch nochmal angucken, weil aus deinem Text überhaupt nicht hervorging, wer "he", "she" usw. war. Du musst klar unterscheiden, ob es gerade um Betty, Tina, ihren Vater oder sonstwen geht, sonst steigt da kein Leser durch. ;)