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Now it’s officially: Barack Obama (47) becomes the 44th president of the United States of America.
Form a Head-to-head-Race like 8 years ago between Al Gore and George W. Bush was there no way. The vote was more some hour’s ago after the closing of the first polling places decided. Besides, Obama is not only more as a coloured president who provides for a novelty, but the supremacy of the McCains party was also broken in some traditionally republican states.

The hit candidate transmitted just as the acting president Bush already his congratulations to Obama. McCain as well as Obama are interested in a collaboration, one says some media reports. This belongs to the political play: Up to some days the opponents were run down in the election campaign, now they presents himself as "gentleman-like".