Englisch profis gesucht!

Bräuchte mal jemanden der meine Stichpunkte auf grammatikale & rechtschreibetechnische Fehler kontrolliert....

-The way to the Oval Office was very hard for Obama, because there were many challenges
-Historians search or gasp for parallels in history
There were comparisons to the past:
•one parallel by Abraham Lincoln when he was taking office as America was collapsing into the Civil War
•second parallel by Franclin D.
Roosevelt when he arrives Washington in the/ or after the Great Depression
-critic that: Obama has no real executive experience
fear that he could not:
•prosecuting 2 Wars
•protecting the USA from terrorist threats
•stitching back to a shredded economy
Obama has little choice but he could put his arms around the chaos to manage this
-Tip from Mr. Panetta: “Make the decisions that involve pain and sacrifice up front.”
-The people don’t know how Obama try’s or what he does at the leader of the USA
Question if he is a good leader and use his Office or if he risks to be paralyzed by one of his own party
-John Bolton says that it’s a question that passivity is a way to approaches most things
 In this question is the answer that passivity is not the right way
-America don’t want a Cowboy- or Bush diplomacy
-Obama’s advisers said that he’s not passive, he’s a person who’s quickly to demonstrate the leadership without waiting until the 20th January
-Obama starts at Wednesday by naming his 3 Co- Leaders which includes John D. Podesta (the former Clinton chief of staff); Valerie Jarrett (Obama’s adviser in the past) and Pete Rouse (Senate chief of staff)
-Obama could also announce the White House appointees by the end of the week
-Rahm Emanuel (a former aide and close friend of Mr. Obama) may become White House chief of staff says well connected Democrats
-The advisers of Obama say that they anticipate the nomination of secretaries of state and treasury by Thanksgiving
 Advisers of Obama says that he should not overstep his bounds and that he wants to inauguration to mark a clean break from the past