Englisch-Korrektur

Hallo Leute

Ich muss eine summary schreiben zu der unteren Geschichte.
Ich hab unten eine suamry geschrieben kann jemand sie bitte korrigieren?

One afternoon a big wolf waited in a dark forest for a little girl to come along carrying a basket of food to her grandmother.
Finally a little girl did come along and she was carrying a basket of food. "Are you carrying that basket to your grandmother?" asked the wolf. The little girl said yes, she was. So the wolf asked her where her grandmother lived and the little girl told him and he disappeared into the wood.

When the little girl opened the door of her grandmother`s house she saw that there was somebody in bed with a nightcap and nightgown on. She had approached no nearer than twenty-five feet from the bed when she saw that it was not her grandmother but the wolf, for even in a nightcap a wolf does not look any more like your grandmother than the Metro-Goldwyn lion looks like Calvin Coolidge. So the little girl took an automatic out of her basket and shot the wolf dead.

(Moral: It is not so easy to fool little girls nowadays as it used to be.)


The text the little girl and the wolf is written by james Thurber and is about a wolf, who is waiting of a girl in the forest.
With the time there came a girl and she went to her grandmother. When she was in the house of the grandmother, she saw that the wolf are in the bed and not his grandmother. She shot wolf from more full impact.

so hab ich es kappiert.